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Gazing
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“Gazing” Gazing at people On the beach... in breaking waves Some hand in hand barefoot in the sand Just what I am going through They will never understand Some try to tell me… My thoughts they cannot defend “Just what you want to be You will be at the end” Yeah right… I have unwritten letters in my heart That’s never been send before But now through my poetry Was send to you at last!! With these eyes of mine I have missed the beauty of love The beauty in truth was never mine I missed out in time Oh! The beauty of loving you Yes I love you yes I do You are my wildest dreams The day beneath the stars The hope and prayer that The universe will be ours Wish I could be in your heart This very moment I wish I could be your eyes!! Looking back Gazing at people On the beach Alone in Sorrow Yeah Copyright ©2003 – 2004 Tinka Boukes All Rights Reserved

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on December 26, 2004

Tinka,

Profoundly excellent my friend - you are a poetess supreme!!

Best to you,

Robert

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on December 9, 2004

Very sad and I echo Earla's thoughts.

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on December 8, 2004

(((tinka)))

hope you're feeling stronger soon--this one brings the reader (me) to tears

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :(

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Very sorrowful and poignant piece ..Tinka...
Resilience is a good quality to develope in times of adversity...
Peter

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Excellent...

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on December 7, 2004

excellent continuity in this poem ... both you and i love the beach and where it allows us to wander ....

Reviewed by Phillip William Allen

A hit the heart pen Tinka

Reviewed by William Bonilla

a heartfelt powerful write

William ....love & peace

Reviewed by Al Swanson (Reader)

this was very, and quite touching Tinka, says so much lady, Al

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Yes it is sad, but the beach can bring smiles, so can watching people, they do such funny things every now and then...Keep Smiling the best you can...Ed & Rufuz

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

A sad one, Tinks. Keep writing.

Reviewed by Denise Edwards

A very special poem, Tinka! Deeply felt pain and love in this.

Reviewed by Faye Enno (Reader)

Sad and powerful write!

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

so sad, tinks; i pray for you every day! i pray you find the peace and happiness in which you seek; turn to Jesus; He'll help you through your sadness! wonderful write!

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Tinka this is truly exceptional, such vivid images and raw emotions.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

This is too sad for words Tinka! I wish you joy my friend and hope you find it soon!

They will never understand