No celebration time No wait... No!! Not a joyful occasion From girl to woman Sudden wet eyed whisper Is that virginity Innocence cries out Before she knew The miracle pass No soft reception Infant guide Male contentment Girl became W
As I hear it, it is not such a great thing to become woman from a girl, although I don't know if guys have it easier either...A simple but poignant write...thanks,Ed & Rufuz
Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
Reviewed on February 27, 2005
Well once again someone has written what I would say so I ditto M.J.
Contraband Marriage, traveling along the hemline of loving after incarceration, is a love story written in lyric and free form, set in reality with a different ever after.
Great write.
Thanks!
Love Tracey
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in america, karen lynn in texas. :D
Outstanding write
most enjoyable
William ..... Peace & Love
Teach on Tinka
Hugs, Carole
Great writing Tinka......
Take care,
Sherry
Superb creation;-)!
love,
eileen
Lisa
Supreme poetic write my friend, absolutely supreme!!
Blessings,
Robert