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Across Horizon Wide
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"Across Horizon Wide" I fear a deadly storm And I fear you will come to harm As clouds grow even darker And the wind blow much harder Oh Sailor Can�t you see I fear a deadly storm Please sail back to shore For you may carry No love letter across the ocean Across horizons so very wide To my love far beyond the stars I stand here and I watch With fear deep within my heart I fear a deadly storm And I fear it might come to harm As clouds so malevolent and dark Grows darker by the minute The wind now U N B E A R A B L E I need to search for shelter soon Oh sailor can�t you see This deadly storms approaching Please sail back to shore And bear with me once more Or are you just another illusion Within my mind Across horizons wide That came To haunt my heart Copyright � 2005 Tinka Boukes All Rights Reserved

Reviewed by m j hollingshead

Reviewed on April 14, 2005

nicely done

Reviewed by Handsum Hart

Sounds like a storm and not an illusion to me.
You'd better take shelter, until the storm clears.

Nice work

Joy and sunshine

Reviewed by George Jackson

Loved this. Great write, Tnka.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

This is quite a poem - and I hope that storm ends soon, Tinka.

Reviewed by Reginald Birch (Reader)

Beautiful romantic poem, exquisitely written and presented, capturing the perils of the sea

Reviewed by M Flack

Beautifully romantic. And the style you have used in the poems structure is unique and well done. Great write as always...

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on April 13, 2005

Haunting write filled with so much love and melancholy...beautiful Tinka..

Hugs, Carole

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Fascinating poem, Tinka

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Nice surf, but breaking too close together to get a really good ride, plus too many rocks breakin' the surface...Ed

Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)

Beautiful and heartbreaking.
Without the music there is an intensity to the words screaming from the heart.

Thanks Tinka
Tracey
Gorgeous but spooky picture.

Reviewed by Michelle Mills

Creative and downright romantic. I loved this Tinka! Michelle

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

A very creative write, Tinka! I enjoyed this.

Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o)

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

So beautiful Tinka, so excellent. just loved this poem,

Reindeer

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Utterly beautiful poetry Tinka, great form!
Wonderful pic and music!

Eileen

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Tinka,

A very 'precise' poetic write ... one that is deeply symbolic of beauty and emotion - most superlative my friend!!

Blessings,

Robert

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Tinka,

A powerful cry from the heart--be well and let the Lord calm the storms.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :(

Reviewed by George Carroll

Ah, the mysteries of the heart. You anticipate storms where none might exist

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

i love the format of this heartbreaking write; you do these so well, tinka! Very good; brava!!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in america, keren lynn in texas. :(

For you may carry