As you walk your shoreline... Can you see me? In the depth of the ocean I am down at the bottom Where shells dance and bump As you walk your shoreline Can you hear me? I am restless… And always ready to change They call me EB & FLOW Can you feel me? I am the sand under your feet The wetness of the sand… Are… those tears… That rolled down my face Know… Each time you walk a shoreline There will be another storm… Deep within me… I rumble Each silver sunray on the horizon Another blessed kiss send your way!!
I'll be there soon ---beautiful pics & more ---nicely done - -Ted
Reviewed by Michael LaSalle (Reader)
Reviewed on May 29, 2007
this is absolutely soothing, tranquil, beautiful, and flows like the winds of an ocean breeze, completely enchanting! loved this piece tink, expresses your talent so very well, mike
Tinka, this is a very relaxing read and the music flows over you as the words sooth..........wonderful write my friend! Thank you for blessing my morning with it!
Huggles
Tina
Reviewed by Mark Mahoney (Reader)
Reviewed on September 4, 2005
A lovely flowing write this Tinka, great words woven so very well, very much enjoyed, take care...Mark xx
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on September 3, 2005
Eb and flow is alright just not that damn undertow.
This is brilliant Tinks.
Truly awesome write Tinka and as I just came back from walking the beach I found it especially poignant.
Felix
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on September 3, 2005
Actually it is so refreshing to read about something other than the storm which has become a political and racial battle. The stupidity of man never ceases to amaze and piss me off. Sorry for my rant on on your time, the poem was lovely, but unlike Huda, I turned the irritating music off. LOL
very nicely done. with the music it seems to almost whisper. soft, a tender heart. sensual in a serene way.
i like this very much.
(i seldom print out other's poetry, but this one & the one before are going into my collection. thanks for sharing.)
TX
A people’s heart can be found in their poetic words. In history men and women have stood firmly upon their soapboxes and street corners, rallying the deepest beliefs of people to rise up and be heard. The poetrypages.com has offered that voice a new
This is a book of free verse poetry that addresses the seven main tests in life and offers some sensible solutions to passing those tests with minimal discomfort.
Share
Print
Save
Follow
Huggles
Tina
This is brilliant Tinks.
and your pc are is perfection..........
Take care,
Sherry
Felix
I love the music and the pic too
love and peace
Tinka another beauty,....You're on fire!!!
I see you ...if that helps at all.
peace',
Rich criso suarez
etw
i like this very much.
(i seldom print out other's poetry, but this one & the one before are going into my collection. thanks for sharing.)
TX
Reindeer