Heart!! What is wrong with you Now is the time to work to pump Silently and out of sight For days now without a break You make these silly jokes with me You stutter you cry you force me You moan and you groan like a pig You jump around between my ribs And I don’t know why you are so disturbed You are my lifeline my body guard my gossip You listen to every word that I said What? What did you say heart? You have to speak up heart and tell me Or you have to keep quite like a slave You must honor my feelings Interjection of justice excitement Fear and happiness Provocation of every embargo What did I hear from you earlier Was that love or was that fear That you let through just now What does all your excitement help you If you start all over again What good does it do to you If you too let me suffer so!!! Please get a grip on reality Before we both land up in fatality When you stop and I die Now is the time to work not to jump Joy is not your toy It belong to another
Well done Tinks! Yep the ole heart can be the best of friends or your most costly enemy! Ours must be related because mine hops, slips, and flops too sometimes. I never thought about telling it off before though! ;-) Let me know if it helps any! LOL
Hugs
Tina
Reviewed by Super Girl
Reviewed on October 9, 2005
This is a cute and clever write. It made me laugh seeing you scold your heart. LOL...did it listen? ~ Sara
fun and tad piece Tink. I wonder about my heart too. The doctor says there's too much pressure on it. If one day I dissappear, know that it gave out and that maybe I'm dead but until then we have some living to do. My heart, your heart and I will be doing my fifth poetry reading tonight, all my poetic friends live in my heart and soul
so much a part of out live so much a part of our death, the physical and spiritual values of the heart are so closely related that it is sometimes hard to separate one from the other. Another great write Tinka from the master of heart strings.
oh the trouble our Heart can get us into, and then when It breaks who feels the pain... who goes insane? not our Heart, our brain.
nice write, darlin'
TX
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Tina
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You have to be nice to your heart. Afterall, it controls you. Heeeheee! Enjoyed the funny picture.
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Great poem!
etw
the heart that is
he can do some fuuny things himself
Loved it
William .......peace & love
Heart to heart everyone is apart..
nice write, darlin'
TX