On the mortal side my love Of somewhere unknown There is a place That is near enough Where I sense you In the indigo of the clouds As daydreams slip sideways And time has No perceptible consequence Elusive As I have become You juggle the urgent need To let me go With a heartfelt desire to Repossess for me The hopes and dreams That give me substance Balanced against the mystery Of what killed me Is a compelling urgency To keep me whole And growing Into righteous womanhood Ours not forever Or exclusively Perhaps but surely Near enough
It's a beautiful and romantic piece
and so sad Tinks. Loved it
Love you Dale
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on December 5, 2005
Near enough can be good enough but you deserve better..
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on December 5, 2005
THIS was such an enjoyable read, Tink. You flitered with surrealism within your words and, at the same time, mysticism all wound around cryptic mystery. Thoroughly enjoyed this.
Ooooo, the tension in this is like a knife-edge, Tinka, a tightrope of emotion that is kept so neatly taut and balanced in bittersweet pain... so near and yet so far!! Tantalising and bleeding with a desire for resolution - last lines brilliant: "Ours not forever Or exclusively Perhaps but surely Near enough! The uncompromising compromise! Love this, thank you. Kate xx
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Dis one here's got some teeth. The ending is purely amazing!
Peace,
B
Paul;-)
and so sad Tinks. Loved it
Love you Dale
Felix
Love & Light,
Joseph
Love,
Eileen
emanates from this passionate and melancholy piece Tinka !
Love
Peter