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Swing
by Tinka Boukes → (All Poetry by Tinka Boukes)
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~Swing~

 

In solitude I sit

The images of children now

Buried beneath the snow

Laughter now missing

Removed from wanton air

Imaginations erased from

Playing in the sky

Firmed grips no longer needed there

Ideal recreation for dedicated moms

With noses nestled in books

Avoiding imaginary warfare,

Or flying trapeze artists with skinned knees

“Will you take your hands off?”  I ask

“Double-dare ‘ya” heard from friends below

‘Fly through the air with the greatest of ease’

Firm footprints now buried beneath the snow

Under bright sun, or moonlit sky

Sounds of make-believe screaming –

Parents make-believe hearing

But I listen for a younger generation to come along

Playing an adult stepping sideways –

As the playing child steps forth

Restless and twitchy at first in my seat

But then has the self-confidence –

Of a king or a queen sitting upon a throne

Entered into their own magical world

Splashing in fountains of mud with their feet,

As parents come running to scold

Now, snow-covered, in solitude I sit alone.

 

Copyright © 2006 Tinka Boukes & Dennis O’Bell
 


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 Reviews of "Swing"
Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on March 12, 2006
This one is sweet--one of your best.

Ron

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on March 12, 2006
beautiful ambiance to this wonderful collab ...

Reviewed by Dave Harm
Reviewed on March 12, 2006
Great write and memories... but thankfully spring is coming and we MIGHT actually make it through the winter with no snow...

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on March 12, 2006
Another beautiful offering, you two...ah the memories of youth you bring back...
love and peace, Carole

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on March 12, 2006
Dear Tinka,

You two make a stunning duo! This is one fantastic poem!

Love & Light,
Joseph

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on March 12, 2006
a king or a queen sitting upon a throne
Entered into their own magical world

King and Queen, you've penned a magical poem here.



Reviewed by Susan Cook-Jahme (Reader)
Reviewed on March 11, 2006
Great feeling in this poem Tinka...glad I'm not in the snow! Brrrr!!
Totsiens, Susan

Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart
Reviewed on March 11, 2006
No feeling like the rush of wind as you jump off your swing at its highest point. That makes the thump as you land all the more satisfying.

Reviewed on March 11, 2006
The swing on the playground, one of the best memories. Still today we can hardly pass without being tempted...beautiful done!
Birgit and Roger

Reviewed by Crystal Silver Angel (Reader)
Reviewed on March 11, 2006
Wonderful lines..

Reviewed by Anne Williams (Reader)
Reviewed on March 11, 2006
tinka, your memories took me back to the playground...the fun and the laughter...swinging as high as i could and daring to jump off flying through the air. this reminds me of something i heard today about the fearless self-confidence of children and how the passage of time, the grating of life can wear that gift down to nothing if we let it. ~a

Reviewed on March 11, 2006

Reviewed by Aberjhani
Reviewed on March 11, 2006
Beautifully moody, elegantly nostalgic, and perfectly imaged. Every line carries the poem deeper inside the reader's heart. Thank you for the gift of SWING.

Reviewed by Mark Mahoney (Reader)
Reviewed on March 11, 2006
Excellent write Tinka, a pure pleasure to be back and what a welcome to read such a brilliant write, well done, hope this finds you and yours very well, take care...Mark xx

Reviewed on March 11, 2006
Nostalgia at it's best, Tinka! Thank you for sharing....

In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by m w
Reviewed on March 11, 2006
Never alone, just apart... a slight bump in life's road... new chances to start... to release an move on... secure in the love you give and hold dear... Never alone

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on March 11, 2006
A fine collaborative offering, Tinka. Thank you for sharing it. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on March 11, 2006
Hi tinka..
Thanks.........x0x0

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on March 11, 2006
Another splendid collab! You bring us into remembrance of both the glee and pathos of life.

eT

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on March 11, 2006
enjoyed the read

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on March 11, 2006
The softness and purity of this write blend into the readers mind as if the writer knew just the right chord to touch their hearts and souls. Thanks for knowing and sharing.

Felix

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on March 11, 2006
Remebering is where your pom placed me for a while. I was quite mesmerizedby your words.
Susan

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
Reviewed on March 11, 2006
Tinka, you've outdone yourself. This reflective poem took me back a few steps and then forward, again.

Carmen

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on March 11, 2006
I agree with Linda below completely
This is a beautiful and touching reminiscence, that reminds me of the joyful clamor and din of the school playground, which is sweet music to the ears !
A seamless and flowing collab, with a very evocative picture Tinka !
Love
Peter

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on March 11, 2006
Drat! I thought it was going to be about swinging, you know, your place or mine, their place or outs. Drat2. Naw, actually a fellow could almost get misty-eyed reading the recollections. Good.

Reviewed by L. Figgins
Reviewed on March 11, 2006
Beautiful reminiscence-sad parallel between the past and present that would be my fate if not for my first grandchild who brings the world of wonder back into my view. Wonderful collab!

Lin


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