My Weary Mind (poem) by Tinka Boukes on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on April 8, 2006

this is charming. very natural and smooth.

Reviewed on April 7, 2006

Thanks Tinka, Micha said it all. This is exactly how weary my mind is.

May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie

"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I have the right to be."

Reviewed by Micha Julian

Reviewed on April 6, 2006

Oh, oh this, so relate in my own way...so open, beautiful/painful...this is so full of honest, open haunting pain and oh, even the tile ...'My Weary Mind'... this all too much got to me, inside one feels this, YOU maker others feel so not alone, as you share so beautifully your heart's pain and yes, the mind wearies and I, well, this simple so moved me...
bravo, Tinka...
Love and Peace to you,
m.

Reviewed by David Young

Reviewed on April 5, 2006

Poetry in graceful motion with a picture that made me smile.

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on April 5, 2006

Well this is my take-don't feel alone
in those feelings and remember you're
not the only one with fitful nights;)
You are a big hearted person that is
so beautiful. Please remember that Tinky!

Reviewed by m w

Reviewed on April 5, 2006

Your words resinate well here, you are not alone, never have been.

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on April 5, 2006

You are becoming the queen of writing poems on heartbreak, Tinka...another fabulous poem
love and peace, Carole

Reviewed by Joyce Hale

Reviewed on April 5, 2006

A beautiful write, Tinka! Through the sadness, your strength shows through though. Exceptional!

Peace. Joyce

Reviewed by Brian Pellerino

Reviewed on April 5, 2006

Tinks,

If I could be the sea of emotions you work your tidal magic on, I would wash over your toes in constant reminder that your creations are your genesis and the light you seek is always around you just waiting to be seen.

Peace my friend,

B

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on April 4, 2006

a sad tone to this poem but as always you've gotten your feelings across quite effectively ...

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on April 4, 2006

Then as well as the rest,
You need to as well your mind rest,
Maybe while over the knee of Alex,
He doesn't seem far from the truth,
Though you wouldn't get me in that position, forsooth...;) ed

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on April 4, 2006

A sad and lovely write my friend
outstanding as only you can compose
thank you for this one
enjoyed much

Love and Peace
William

Reviewed by m j hollingshead

Reviewed on April 4, 2006

like the graphic, like the poetry

Reviewed by Alex Nodopaka

Reviewed on April 4, 2006

I said before
and say again
you need a gentle spanking
by a naughty man

that'll make your blood rush
to your sad cheeks
and bring new life
with a dazzling smile

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on April 4, 2006

I like what Peter said about you; that is so true! I hope things get better soon; you are in my prayers today!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :(

Cute pic, though...

Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster

Reviewed on April 4, 2006

Sad, but wonderful write. Good luck sweetie. LOL

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on April 4, 2006

Very sad and dejected tone here Tinks...
You are the Patsy Cline of Author's Den...
Love
Peter

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on April 4, 2006

Nicely written, the reader can certainly understand, or at least are aware of your plight.

Reviewed by totally anonymous (Reader)

Reviewed on April 4, 2006

beautiful and heart felt wirte