Blest Thoughts (poem) by William Bonilla on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on January 31, 2005

My muse has just returned, William,
after taking a break of about
2-4 weeks it seems! So, don't worry!
Wonderful poem with an excellent
message!
Becca

Reviewed by Zoe Chow

Reviewed on January 30, 2005

This is a great poem William. I enjoy reading your work, it's so well put together.
Zoe

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on January 30, 2005

We here at the den wouldn've known each other at all without the computers internet.
I'm happy to know you and others here at ad William.
Great write.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on January 30, 2005

Willwiam this is a fantastic write. I too love the fact of the
human brain for the world dwells within it. Perfectly said!

love,eileen

Reviewed by Chanti Niven

Reviewed on January 30, 2005

Lubricating the memory banks
Of the most precious computer
The Human brain
For the world, dwells within it.

Great last lines conclude this thought-provoking poem. Congrats on the story (on my way to read it). I hope your muse has returned.
Love Chanti

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on January 29, 2005

I love this one, William....sometimes I think our muses take a few days off, just like we do....beautifully written
Peace and love, Carole

Reviewed by Nila Jamier (Reader)

Reviewed on January 29, 2005

Time Travelers this is so well written William.:)

Reviewed by Zenith Elliott

Reviewed on January 29, 2005

Very true...I have come to reason that at times our minds need a rest period and like anything else there are so many factors in life that can affect our feelings and thoughts. Excellent poem! ~Z~

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on January 29, 2005

My computer sometimes a little off beat...but thank God for that little grey "thingy" called brain upstairs!!

Haunting story you have written,,,thank goodness you controlled your frustrations!!

Cool!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen

Reviewed on January 29, 2005

Ah, the mysterious human brain... which came first, brain or mind?
Very nice write, William. The world of the poet's fringe element is where creativity's Light burns.
Best,
Carolyn

Reviewed by Danielle Mundy

Reviewed on January 29, 2005

Very true write, enjoyed this very much...on my way to check out your story :).

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on January 29, 2005

Inspiration comes and go, Bill, I think we all experience that at times...my well has run dry many times, and I bet there are some that wish it would run dry permanently...LOL ;) ! Stay well and keep travelling thru time...Ed & rufuz

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)

Reviewed on January 29, 2005

You are so right and I loved your story.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on January 29, 2005

We're the time travelers

I guess we are at that, and I will check out your story, William.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on January 29, 2005

Yup, it surely does..