Last Thoughts (poem) by William Bonilla on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on March 22, 2005

hello William, touching piece. Hopefully an innocent condemmed man will get blanks, maybe a rotten rope, etc. G

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on March 22, 2005

A powerful sad write. Well-expressed.

Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o(

Reviewed by Melissa Rives

Reviewed on March 21, 2005

Very chilling, powerful and quite a profound ending...

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on March 21, 2005

Chillingly captivating, William. Thank you. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on March 20, 2005

This ran a chill down my spine and gave me shivers, William. One does wonder what may go through the mind of the one awaiting execution. I would hope it would be remorse for the lives he had taken, perhaps a moment to understand how the family of the ones he murdered have had to live, but more likely it will be him thinking about his impending death and the fate that awaits him. Excellent writing.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on March 20, 2005

Those last three lines say it, Bill...they are most powerful and descriptive...ed

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on March 20, 2005

Wow..powerful and so chilling, this is excellent,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on March 20, 2005

Powerful haunting thoughts, William.

Love and peace, Carole

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on March 20, 2005

Wow William these are intriguing thoughts my friend!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Rosemarie Skaine

Reviewed on March 20, 2005

Sobering. R

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on March 20, 2005

really well written, intriguing thoughts ... only "The Man" he did not believe in could really care ...

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Reviewed on March 20, 2005

"Only the man he did not believe in knows for sure"
How profound of you, William. Enjoyed this. ~~Nordette

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on March 20, 2005

Reminds me of The Ballad of Reading Goal. By Mr Wilde.
Very atmospheric.
I stood on an old 17th century scaffold, in Bodium gaol.
Wondering the same kinda thoughts.
They hanged kids just for stealing a loaf of bread.
Or if they were unlucky, got sent to Australia.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on March 20, 2005

William you mesmerize with this one! Totally bone chilling thoughts!
Superb poem!!!

etw

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on March 20, 2005

Haunting, chilling, and very powerful, William.

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on March 20, 2005

powerful........and frightening.......so well penned.
As an X cop.........did you have had connections to this type of experience.......???

actions and consequences........the rough part of life!
whew
pax A