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Just Another Cliche
by William Bonilla → (All Poetry by William Bonilla)
   Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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This morning I failed to wake
My eyes are open
But they see not
Just a glazed stared
Into the infinity, Of what I was
The mind they say
Stays alert for a while
Which leaves me wondering
Who today will cry, laugh or be sad
Who will bow their heads
Saying "Oh no!, not him
He was such a nice guy
Or what a jerk he was.

Hope He's in a better place
Bye Dad, At least
You're not in pain anymore
Thank God he went in his sleep
That was my favorite
Little did they know
I was gasping for air
Struggling to saty alive
At least till somebody found me
My lungs breathe no more
I gave up, just letting nature
Take it's course
So I wouldn't resemble
One who died in horror.

As my father did
He didn't want to die
Not at work, not alone
Without family to surround him
When I viewed his remains
I refused to believe
It was my father
Eyes popped out, as if he had seen
The Grim Reaper itself
No, I let go
To die with dignity
Said my final prayers
Hoped for the best
Love me or hate me
Please, I don't want to be
Just Another Cliche.

By: William Bonilla
07/01/05

 

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Reviewed by June Thompson (Reader)
Reviewed on September 13, 2005
neither do I.. as I say this all the time. I dont want to be another cliche, a statistic, a norm, a typical .....

this was so much needed to be read

Reviewed on July 3, 2005
touching William, happy 4th July. Thought about you and others as I wrote, "Dying for Country."

Reviewed by Paul Williams
Reviewed on July 3, 2005
Superb write William and far from being cliche.

Paul;-)

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on July 3, 2005
A soul-gripping, realistic look at the inevitable, William. Very powerful. Thank you. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on July 3, 2005
Such a profound and powerful write William, a hard one to think about. As always a wonderful offering!

Peace and love, Carole

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on July 3, 2005
powerful glimpse of death's reality ... we can only be cliche if we allow ourselves to be ...

Reviewed on July 3, 2005
Ah William, this is so very poignant. you will never be a cliche!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Mark Mahoney (Reader)
Reviewed on July 3, 2005
Very powerfull write this William and done with great grace and style, well done...Mark

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on July 3, 2005
This is one very touchy read...and yes I agree I would also like to die piecefully...quick..no pain no suffering...and then be cremated and my ashes scattered to the sea!! There must me NOTHING left behind...no urn...for no one to be reminded I was there once!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on July 2, 2005
You write as well dead as you did alive...or is that a cliche too...? Ed

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on July 2, 2005
William you pack a hard wallop!No kids play in this excellent poem!
You'll never be a cliche! Blessings to you!

Happy Fourth

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Susan Barton (Reader)
Reviewed on July 2, 2005
At least YOU will never be a cliche. You are an original!

Reviewed by Rosemarie Skaine
Reviewed on July 2, 2005
Expresses a reality at death. Excellent write. R


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