I posted this piece as a challenge Poem
At another site.
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I have written over several hundred
Poetic pieces
And to my amazement
Non with the word Hope
Within the title
Nor about Hope itself
This I remembered
While on an ora boat
A rowing.
Does not mean
Lack of, is within me
Hope
Sometimes I get confused,
Is Hope The same as Wish
Or desire, is it not?
Because
I have spent a life time
Doing a lot of wishing.
To me Hope Is like
A Religious thing
A word
Mostly used or mentioned
In Church.
So how may I put this
"I Wish" The Poem Meets
The Challenge
Or "I Hope"
interesting... "hope" is the one concept that did NOT seem tied to religion or church or society and it has been the one to lift me as a feather and keep me drifting toward a future. enjoyed your poem, Dawn
"To me Hope Is like A Religious thing A word Mostly used or mentioned In Church." Many people think this and it is probably used in "religions." Christianity is not a religion, so, hope to me means Knowledge, assurance. Sort of like Jude said. But I say, A desire for the light, a knowing that I will see the light. When used in casual conversation, it takes on an entirely different meaning. Very good write.
Good thought provoking poem William! Hope is usually the thing wished for,You wish for something and hope you'll get it.;-) Desire, yearning, craving all in the same family. You wish people would read the poem and hope it meets the challenge;-)..hahaha
Hope, desire and wish all belong to the same family. Let me say they are birds of different feathers. If wish and desire are the dove and the eagle, Hope is the ostrich. From another viewpoint, one can have a hope without a wish or a desire but cannot wish or desire without having hope in the first place. You can wish and desire within the framework of hope. HOpe seems to be much heavier than the other two as one would pick the word Hope when trying to say something implicated to Eternity or God though he/she was able to use wish or desire. Put it this way again: nature has a wish to serve man at his satisfaction by providing all what he needs but hopes that he shall not destroy it. A thought-provoking piece.
Hope is wish and desire both only perhaps a little bit more passive, more muted. It is the only thing that sees us through this life. Nice write :-) shoma
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Excellent write, thought provoking and well done; BRAVO!
I'd be lost without hope...and dreams...and especially, faith.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
love and peace, Carole
There is an arcane in this title, "What About Hope?", and there is
an esoteric intention within it... "What About Hope?"
- IT IS A STRIKING WRITING!
I salute You, Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Love
Eileen
HELP OFFERED PAIN ENGULFED!!
Just my clouded mind speaking!!
Fine offering....to me wish/hope is the same thing!!
Love Tinka