Along Came a Spider (poem) by William Bonilla on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on December 4, 2006

Poor li'l spider! Was it as big in death as you thought it to be in life? 'Twas just a little creature tryin' to survive - unless it was a T'rant :o)

Micke

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on November 27, 2006

In your warm climate those leggy critters must thrive...up here where it is colder ours seem to have disappeared for the winter...yeh!
thanks for the chuckle this morning Bill
love and peace, Carole

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on November 27, 2006

Poor little spider! And exactly what my spider phobic spouse would do.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on November 27, 2006

Oh my goooooooooodness..this made me look around searching for spiders ..feet on the table...damn you made me do this William Bonilla...geeeeeeez have mercy on me heart thingy called "Heart attack" OKAY!!!

Feet up High!!

LOVE...maybe Tinka :)

Reviewed by Morning Star

Reviewed on November 26, 2006

I am very afraid of spiders I was bitten
By a brown recluse in my finger it's not
very pretty side to look at it turns brown
and rots!!
Excellent imagery vivid picture of spider
and excellent choice of words and tone!!
Love And Peace To You...Morning Star

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on November 26, 2006

I am not fond of spiders at all, William and I will have to stop myself because I will stomp them and stomp them until you can not even find pieces of them anymore. Ever since I read that thing that said that each of us eats some crazy number of spiders while sleeping, I have been on a witch-hunt for them, and any that I see will be destroyed...sad really...they do serve a good purpose in the garden, but in my garden, they are not safe either...Quick death by flip-flop! OK now I have the creepy-crawlies and so close to bedtime too!!
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on November 26, 2006

HAHAHAHA, YOU sound just like me, but i don't stop till it and its relitives are found too..

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)

Reviewed on November 26, 2006

Poor spider. They are usually harmless. In its death it became writ for posterity. Victor

Reviewed by CJ Heck

Reviewed on November 26, 2006

Adorable poem, William! As much as I write about 'spiders', I hate the little buggers!
Love,
CJ

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)

Reviewed on November 26, 2006

Too cute! Lol, had a good laugh at this one, way to go!

Reviewed by Sara Coslett

Reviewed on November 26, 2006

LOL...this is cute. Just goes to show you, you can find inspiration anywhere. ~ Sara

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on November 26, 2006

You should pay the spiders family for helping you to find your muse...better to pay them off, before they sue you...;) ed

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Reviewed on November 26, 2006

Very Zen. :-) ~~Nordette

Reviewed by J M (Reader)

Reviewed on November 26, 2006

HAHAHA Oh William they scare me too....... This was so good. :)
Light & peace,
Joselyn

The ittsy bittys spider.....