In 2003 my
4 year old granddaughters and I collaborated with a few fun kiddy
poems (Garden series (Collaboration), now they are 8 years old and want to go on their own (how do you like them apples!!!)
#1. SHEEP
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Sheep, sheep, sheep
Fast asleep
And you don't hear a peep
Ou of the Sheep, Sheep, Sheep.
In the barn Yard
Fast asleep
And nobody can hear
A peep out of
The Sheep, Sheep, Sheep.
By Gabrielle Bonilla Lodato
(The Gab)
12/12/06
#2. When Someone Falls Asleep
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When somebody falls asleep
He sleep morning till night
The very next day
He did the same thing again
He did it again and again
Than the next day
He never fell back to sleep
Again, again and again
By Brianna Bonilla Lodato
(Ms. Peabody)
04/30/06
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Reviewed by Miss Pandora (Reader)
Reviewed on January 8, 2007
Soo sweet William....through the eyes of a child the world is such a delightful place to visit, isn't it? Just lovely, Panda :)
How fortunate for Gabrielle and Brianna (love those beautiful names!) to have a Grandfather to learn from. Congratulations, girls, for your delightful poetry! Hope you send more our way.
(We'll now need to stay on our toes, William, or these two will be outshining us soon :o)
These two writes are adorable and from the mouths of babes! So, so cute...I would print them and frame them my friend...children are wonderful, grandchildren are too! You've taught them well my friend, learning to appreciate poetry at an early age...and quality time with their grandfather, doesn't get any better than that!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
(We'll now need to stay on our toes, William, or these two will be outshining us soon :o)
Micke
Love and peace..Tinka
pleace and love, Carole
Thank you for sharing these poems with me.
Love,
Susan
Love,
CJ
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
These poems are so cute, and a delight to read. Your grandchildren are going to grow up to be great poetesses.
Sandie May Angel :o)