I write Poetry, About you
You ignor me
And won't read them
I dance in the clouds
And you don't see me
I sing you a song
From within my heart
Yet you don't hear me
Your legs are hairy
Never shaved,
For fear of the blade
Your body well formed and trimed
You seem to stay in shape
I crave
Kissing the sweetness
Of lips, you don't possess
I can't see
I'm unable to find
You can't taste mine.
My heart aches
When you're not around
Others kick me
When I'm on the ground
I whisper I love you
Hear me, you don't
You refuse to listen
I touch you
You shrug from me
Creeping away
Retreating to the cubbyhole
Of your security
Within
A prepared world, I've provided
With special effects
I love you, you know?
You will always be
My special love
My favorite, pet tarantula.
You got me. I was envisioning a third world beauty who spurning your love. The imagery in this piece was tantilizing. It kept me reading wanting to know who this siren was who had captured your heart but was so cruel.
You a crazy man, Bill...a tarantula makes a good pet, loyal, protects the house, loves going for walks on a little leash...or am I speaking of dogs, well any pet is fun, just don't let that one bite you...Ed
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on February 15, 2007
Oh my,I almost wet my ...well you know LOL....Hugssssssssss
Reviewed by Michael Mathieu (Reader)
Reviewed on February 15, 2007
Oh my gosh William, I needed this laugh today...Your legs are hairy
never shaved,I busted out laughing and again feeling sorry for you,
Thank God it was a tarantula...Loved it,
Michael
Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on February 15, 2007
(laughing) I nearly fell off my chair reading the ending on this one! Great poem William, love Holly
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love and peace, Carole
Love......maybe Tinka $*V*$
Carolyn
never shaved,I busted out laughing and again feeling sorry for you,
Thank God it was a tarantula...Loved it,
Michael
My favorite, pet tarantula.
She's just playing hard to get, William! Find out what her favorite meal is, and she'll soon be yours!!
George
you got me good with this one.........
happy valentines day lol
pax A