William, this grabbed me hard as I was reading it, each line of images kept me still and waiting line after line of uncertainty...snap, oh...how great...it's only a dream. Your voice speaks in a stern realism which draws the reader in. You had me fooled until the end...glad it was only a dream. Enjoyed!
Scary dream...I had a dream of a flood once like this...worried me for days. You've penned it well my friend, expressed well! Thank God it was a dream!
Blessings,
Joyce B.
Wow that was a terrible nightmare and
I'm sure one that truly scare you!
Yes Thank God it was only a dream
outstanding poem excellent imagery
And I'm so glad at the end it was only a bad
Bad dream!!
Take care..Love Peace and happiness and no more
Nightmares.....Morning Star
As nightmares come, this one was one of those rare with a happy end, to remember it and to write about shows the readiness of the author to have the presence of mind to run disregarding his own life and wrestle from a twister the flesh of his own.
Well written.
Georg
Using Calgary as a backdrop the author satirizes the self-serving nature of the public as it continues to fatten itself, not only physically, but egotistically as well.
This collection of poetry addresses the nature of time, reflections on the natural world, the difficulty of loss,
contemporary social issues and gratitude for life.
Happy to know it was only a dream my friend!!
Love Tinka
(((HUSG))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(
Blessings,
Joyce B.
I'm sure one that truly scare you!
Yes Thank God it was only a dream
outstanding poem excellent imagery
And I'm so glad at the end it was only a bad
Bad dream!!
Take care..Love Peace and happiness and no more
Nightmares.....Morning Star
Well written.
Georg
ET
Love,
Susan
Peace,
Dan