Ashes Of Poetry (poem) by William Bonilla on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on April 20, 2017

I SEE THAT THIS WAS WRITTEN IN 2008 AND CERTAINLY SHOWS THE 'UPS' AND 'DOWNS' OF POETS, AS THEY 'WAIT' FOR INSPIRATION TO RETURN. SO GLAD THAT IT...ALWAYS, ALWAYS... DOES. THANKS FOR SHARING, MY FRIEND. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Mary Patterson

Reviewed on February 5, 2008

SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL! You have captured much with your broken pen!....M

Reviewed by Walt Hardester

Reviewed on February 1, 2008

Excellent! The ashes fell just right here.

Walt

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on January 30, 2008

'The ashes of past memories' ...'Like rain drops in an ocean'. BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!! I love this POEM!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Mary Coe

Reviewed on January 26, 2008

Awesome!

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on January 25, 2008

Amazing write old chap...

Reviewed by twinklewrites at her desk (Reader)

Reviewed on January 24, 2008

Heartfelt inking William, after writing for so many years my friend I believe your fluid will always arise to greater heights, fabulous writing...Hugs and Love, Peggy

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on January 24, 2008

A beautiful write my friend...you've expressed very well what every writer has or will experience! I have...but from my own experience when the time is right the inspiration flows so effortlessly and in such an abundance sleep doesn't come easy! Well done!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on January 24, 2008

This is an excellent write William...welcome back, and I really like your new photo, I have to figure out how to change them.
love, Carole~

Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill

Reviewed on January 24, 2008

Simply beautiful!
Becca~

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on January 24, 2008

Well written...one fine piece!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on January 24, 2008

One of your gems William!

ciao
et

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on January 24, 2008

But like the Great Winged Phoenix, they will soon rise again.

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on January 24, 2008

William, I can see the date of this poem, August2007, you have come a long way, your passion is inside of you always, it never leaves, just takes a slight vacation..We have written amazing passionate poetry and there is no doubt in my mind that you have never really lost your passion, just tired and needed rejuvenation..No get going on that collab Mr. Passion.. lol
Peace, love, and Light my dearest friend,
Amber "V'

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on January 24, 2008

We have all been there William, look out for when your ashes blow away.Thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on January 24, 2008

William,

You come back with a roar that all poets hear (and feel!). Excellent write.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on January 24, 2008

Nothing more exiting than to go falling into a cosmic black hole, the problem is...how we get out of there?
And, how we fulfill those denied desires?

Georg

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on January 24, 2008

It happens to me. I get a story idea cookin', then "Poof"! All gone! GRRRR!! I HATE it when that happens! Good write, William; good to read you again! (And review! :) ) Very well penned; bravo!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on January 24, 2008

I think this happens to every writer occassionally..at least I know that it has to me. But the thing is, you wrote about it beautifully!

Reviewed by Cryssa C

Reviewed on January 24, 2008

As Kathy said... from the ashes rise the phoenix.
Cryssa

Reviewed by John Leko

Reviewed on January 23, 2008

...ink will find its way back into the lost reservoir...and spill over once again with freedom...your thoughts again dipped into fountains of passion...again renewed.
your thoughts shared William...
John

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on January 23, 2008

Drained and void...that's how I felt when this happened to me. Have no fear. It is short lived! I promise. Sad is this poem.
Love and blessings,
Susan

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo

Reviewed on January 23, 2008

While your quill may be shattered, it did give you an oportunity to write about your the ashes of poetry that each of us has felt. But, you are such a master, I am sure that you will find a ballpoint pen or computer keyboard to reconfigure those ashes and give them life and they shall erupt into a more beautiful Phoenix.

God bless you. Kathy

Reviewed by Eileen Granfors

Reviewed on January 23, 2008

The fleetingness of the poetic muse. . .I like your phrasing "writing upon a vortex"--good writing, enjoyable reading, William. Eileen