Death Is Born (poem) by William Bonilla on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Mary Patterson

Reviewed on May 8, 2008

GREAT IMAGES. You have brought it to life with vison and clairity....M

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on May 8, 2008

Superb imagery in this beauty William!
Hope all is well with you!

Love,
ET

Reviewed by John Leko

Reviewed on May 6, 2008

...strong poetic visual pen...in darker colors...cast natures misfortune in your excellent write.
John

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on May 6, 2008

From the four corners
Of the world
Winds gather from hell

It often seems like that these days, and when Katrina came, it, indeed, felt like that to many, many souls.

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on May 6, 2008

Oh my,so very powerful..great writing sweet man..have a wonderful and safe day...HUgs

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on May 5, 2008

Sailors that have go through a typhoon have seen death going by and heard the merciless cackling of that witch storm.
Your poem should give something to think to those that are saying, "its only a storm..."

Georg

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on May 5, 2008

Powerfully vivid picture you created in the mind.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on May 5, 2008

a very powerful write--so well written your words painted a vivid picture which carried me along

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on May 5, 2008

I know we have too many tornados here..
You have explained the hurricane well William..
Ron

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on May 5, 2008

Yes, The rage of Mother Nature, gotta respect it though. It is a poem filled with so much imagery. When Mother Nature blows, we all have to run for cover.
You captured her fury very well, William, nicely done.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh

Reviewed on May 5, 2008

Perfect! What a write, hurricaines are indeed deadly.

Reviewed by Morning Star

Reviewed on May 5, 2008

Beautiful!!! this is the birth of a Brilliant write!!!
Outstanding Imagery and flow and vividness!!
Love that soft tone!
Stunning!!!
Peace love and Light...and Hugesss too...Morning star

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on May 5, 2008

EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on May 5, 2008

WOW, powerful visuals within this excellent write, William...
peace and love, Carole~

Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks

Reviewed on May 5, 2008

WOW! Well Done, dear William! Your words carried strong motions and emotions in this poem. Happy it is to see D'Artagnan hitting his stride again. Hope you are feeling SO much better....
Blessings and Love ~~ Micke

Reviewed by Tiana ~ (Reader)

Reviewed on May 5, 2008

Excellent poem, William! I could feel the wind and see the ocean churning in this wonderfully written poem ... The hurricane season is upon us ... hugs

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on May 5, 2008

great poetic reminder of this world we live in William,, I think the people in Virginia just recently experienced this destruction with the tornados that struck down

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on May 5, 2008

The birth of a powerful force,,,,William this is excellent !
Love, Christine

Reviewed by Dee C.

Reviewed on May 5, 2008

Brillant imagery...love this one!!

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on May 5, 2008

I read your words and feel the cold haunting breeze blow over me.It appears to be a nasty one on the way William. I'll shiver now. Thank you for sharing.

Newfie hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on May 5, 2008

Look deep - and behold, the eye of the storm ... that's what came to mind, reading this chilling write! Compelling lines draw the reader into the maelstrom before they realize it - they're hooked! Excellent imagery in verse, William, very well penned.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Glad our storms are calm - today - now Wednesday could be a whole 'nuther matter! LOL

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on May 5, 2008

YIKES. Chilling write, William; THANKS a LOT. LOL Very well penned; bravo!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :)

If I have nightmares tonight, buddy boy, I'm a blamin' YEW!!!!! LOL