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The First Day
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The First Day ~*~ It was his first day “There” To him it was something “New” For today starts The road to understanding. She woke him early Dawn was not outside Their window yet She prepared him For his first day Bathe him, combed his hair Selected What he was to wear She made him His favorite breakfast Lovingly washed his face again And cleaned his hands. She held his hand tenderly Escorting him to the garage Opening the car door Sat and secured him On the front passenger side Clicked the child lock So he not open the door While she drives For her It was a painful fifteen mile drive Thoughts went through her head Hoping he do well Getting used to being away. She knew one thing He will get along with others He was that way Charismatic Others enjoyed his company He smiled Upon meeting new friends. The time has arrived Pulling into the parking lot A “Teacher” was waiting By the door She walked him to the front She kissed him, whispering “I Love You” I will pick you later She watched him Disappeared in the building. She returned to the car For four hours Of his first day She cried and waited there, Inscribed Above the entrance door Were carved, the words Alzheimer’s Rehabilitation Center. By William Bonilla “D’Artagnan” 10/09/08

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on October 22, 2008

Quite a twist at the end of this gripping poem. I worked in an Alzheimer's unit in a nursing home as a housekeeper. Boy...did I have my favorite patients! You describe their reliance perfectly. Like children, Alzheimer patients have an innocence that I couldn't help but find endearing. Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on October 20, 2008

Everyone has said it, sad and well written William.

Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill

ohh, so sad. I was reminded of my first day in school, until the last line. Twisted ending. Great write, though.
Love,
Becca~

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Oh brother! at least he don't understand (that's what the docs said) for a moment my heart cringed, I though you were to hit me with a "War-Veterans Rehabilitation Center", because he would understand and there will be two crying that moment.
Alzheimers...I hope He doesn't have those plans for me, I kind of like my dignity, don't want to go without it.

Georg

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on October 19, 2008

What I thought was a write about a child's first day of school has turned into something unexpected. William, this is so beautiful. You have moved me to tears.

Reviewed by Lois Christensen

My mother in law who did not want to go to daycare for Altheimer's complained too. She is dead now, but eventually went into a nursing home too. She just did not like leaving her home each morning with her Daughter and her daughter found it hard to take her there too. Good story, just the way is with this type disease.

Reviewed by jude forese

a sad ending to a well written poem ...

Reviewed by E T Waldron

So very sad, William! it was so like a little boys first day at school, I was completely surprised...Excellent analogy!

Love,
ET

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

William, I knew that you were talking about Alzheimer's, I just knew it. My dearest friend has a dad that has Parkinson's and Alzheimer's, she takes him to daycare every day...It is a very sad thing, but these day cares are very good for them..Keeps them active and the family can have a break.
Much peace, love, and light to you my dearest friend,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

oh, how very sad--well expressed

Reviewed by Denise Edwards

Wow. Unexpected ending that made me teary eyed. Wondefully done, William.

Reviewed by Bonnie May

OMG I was reliving my children's first day of school never expected this surpise ending. Wonderful but sad write. It touched my heart. Love and hugs, Bonnie

Just finished the last episode of Dr. Bonnie and just posted it. Hope you like it. Love, Bonnie