Last snow of 2008 (poem) by William Bonilla on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on January 7, 2009

William,
I like the contrast between the many different images here. There's an overall feeling of peace, maybe because of the alone time. A great poem:)
Sheila

Reviewed by Mary Patterson

Reviewed on January 4, 2009

Excellent imagery ..............M

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on January 4, 2009

well written capture ...

Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill

Reviewed on January 4, 2009

A little troublesome, but well composed.
Love,
Becca~

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle

Reviewed on January 4, 2009

Excellent poem you have written,take care

Edwin

Reviewed by Morning Star

Reviewed on January 3, 2009

Love this gem
Your words painted such beautiful picture
I saw the snowy and now I'm very cold!
Brilliant write!!
Wishing you Peace Love and Light....Yolie

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)

Reviewed on January 2, 2009

A beautiful poem William, love Holly

Reviewed by Bonnie May

Reviewed on January 2, 2009

Stay warm and cozy my snowy friend. Wonderful snowy poem to enjoy by the fire. Love and hugs, Bonnie

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on January 2, 2009

This displays such beauty and peace, well done William!
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Sheri Uy

Reviewed on January 1, 2009

Hello William,

Philippines is a tropical country and most of the time, it's hot. But as I read you poem line after line, I can almost feel the icy cool air, the snow beneath my feet. I think that serene babbling brook is so refreshing.

May 2009 bring you good luck, peace and everlasting love.

Be well,
Sheri

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson

Reviewed on January 1, 2009

Very expressive poem! I especially love the last stanza! Happy New Year to you and yours!

Gwen

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on January 1, 2009

William you have captured the feels and sounds of a day filled with snow...just beautiful
peace and love, Carole~

Reviewed by Linda Law

Reviewed on January 1, 2009

William, nice way to end 2008, and begin 2009.... I especially like the crunching sound too... not the cold tho... Your poem is very nice, and I look forward to reading many more from you!! Happy New Year! hugs, lindalaw

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on January 1, 2009

Nothing beats walking on dry snow which gives that crunching rhythm with every step to acompany the silence.

Georg

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on January 1, 2009

Beautiful as usual William, We have a glimmer of snow but man oh man it is freezing out there, too cold to think of going out -28, I'll stay in thank you.
HAPPY NEW YEAR William, I hope all great things happen to you.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on January 1, 2009

Beautiful poem, I like it!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And wish YOU HAPPINESS EVERY DAY IN NEW YEAR!!!!!!!!!!!.....AND EVERY DAY!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on January 1, 2009

So this is to say you are not in Florida, I guess...e

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on January 1, 2009

At least you get snow; we haven't had a decent snow in several years; I sure do miss it! Got any you can share? I wouldn't mind! LOL

Very well penned; happy New Year to you and your loved ones; may it be your best year EVER!!!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on December 31, 2008

A beautiful scene you paint in verse, William. Happy New Year!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Snow? Think it's white. We don't get that 'round this neck of the woods too often. LOL

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on December 31, 2008

Last of everything for 08?
Your doing great free verse these days,
Happy snowie 2009...
Ron

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on December 31, 2008

Yes, you have captured this last snowfall of 2008 so well. We received almost 8" of snow in one day. Can I go back to Florida with you?
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"