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A Night's Silence
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A night’s silence I couldn’t wait till tomorrow For its not promised to me I had to see you tonight So I may drift to a heavenly Dream To dream of your loveliness. The wind was whispering your name My life on earth Will never be the same. A breath of wild flower’s Perfume Electrified my senses As my mind Revisit those moments We laid among The Green clovers In the fertile meadows Where the unicorn prances. You I embraced In my loving arms As we awe At unforgettable Sunsets. Waiting for the silvery Pale blue moon’s rays To bath our nakedness Hidden under the mighty oak By the sereneness Of the silent stream Softly passes us by. The beat of our hearts Serenade The creatures of the night As their silence Became deafening. By : William Bonilla “D’Artagnan” 02/08/09

Reviewed by Johanna Fields (Reader)

Reviewed on March 31, 2009

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on February 16, 2009

How many have lost their virginity in such a setting. Great imagery in this romantic poem about lovers in the heat of the night under a pale moon.

Reviewed by Mary Patterson

Reviewed on February 15, 2009

Wow William, the poem takes my breath away! Its sensual and romantic with great imagery....M

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on February 14, 2009

William,
I like the magical touches in your imagery. Romance never dies in an imagination such as yours. Beautiful poem.
Sheila

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on February 11, 2009

William, romantic and beautiful as ever. Not sure if I agree with the Reader James Garry that has commented below. Out of a 200 I give it a 201! Not quite sure what a Wheelman named Bo has to do with your poem, but I know a Goddess that would love to be in your warm embrace kissing your passionate lips and seeing her soul in your eyes.
Love this poem, William and as always you leave me wanting more....
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle

Excellent poem,I enjoy reading it,take care

Edwin

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

smooth as a phat beauties bottom William, you and I seem to love writing this romantic verse, tight on brother

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Enchantingly romantic offering, William...beautiful!
peace and love, Carole~

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on February 10, 2009

..very peacful,,,the silence of the night. Charming and romantic!

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on February 9, 2009

Magically romantic!

Reviewed by 000 000 (Reader)

Truly magical and romantic words!

A perfect evening

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

You are such a romantic that I find it hard to believe that your past was in such a hard, thankless job in the NYPD...ed

Reviewed by Walt Hardester

Methinks you are not the street hardened ex-policia we know you are, but an old romantic. Your words always portray soft romantic scenarios. Maybe it was the streets that brought out your gentler side. Sweet dreams.....

Walt

Reviewed by Bonnie May

Very passionate and compassionate write William for it let us in and made us feel what you were experiencing...lovely write...love and hugs, Bonnie

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

I swear William I could read your words over and over and never tire. Thank you for sharing.

Newfie hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Your passionate pen shines like the moon here, D'Artagnan.

Reviewed by Mary Lacey Desertrat

Bill,

Such a wonderful and colorful write expressing your love.

Mary

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

a lovely poem

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

D'Artagnan, Musketeer de la Reine, as romantics writes go, you haven't yet found one with enough combat experience to tell you en-garde! ! !
My friend, you are melting the girls hearts, leave something to us, please?

Georg

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Very romantic and beautiful!!!!!!!!!! 'The wind was whispering your name'...-------I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva