How truly romantic and nicely written, very "captivating" lines.
You write so well about love's little traps, a look, a smile...
full of hidden meanings.
Oh my, the risk of being infatuated...some day that smile will be "real" and you will be smiling for the rest of your life!
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Wow And wow This beautifully written poem
Your choice of words have painted a picture
Of wondering feelings and longings
Brown eyes and a powerful smile!
Stunning romantic!!
Beautiful!!!
Peace Love and Light...Yolie
Last time I smile like that above, her father went for his shotgun but I was faster that him...well, at that time, now...is another story.
Watch out with teasing smiles, bigamy is still an offense!
Questions, unquestioned discoveries, and answers in parable and rhyme…. This collection records a journey starting with a 1960s retrospective and the first man on the moon, moving to a new millennium welcomed in with a terrorist spin, family crises,
Sheila
How truly romantic and nicely written, very "captivating" lines.
You write so well about love's little traps, a look, a smile...
full of hidden meanings.
Cynthia
Edwin
peace and love, Carole~
Love,
Christine
Love the roses!
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Your choice of words have painted a picture
Of wondering feelings and longings
Brown eyes and a powerful smile!
Stunning romantic!!
Beautiful!!!
Peace Love and Light...Yolie
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Fee
Watch out with teasing smiles, bigamy is still an offense!
Georg