Sad. Your pen stirred my emotions, which is not an easy task. Well done.

Sometimes crying helps to cleanse the inner soul! A touching poem....M

A powerful and emotional written piece,take care.You are a great poet

EDWIN

YOUR PHRASES PRODUCE VIVID IMAGERY IN THIS POEM THAT BARES A PART OF YOUR SOUL. WELL WRITTEN AND THANKS FOR SHARING. GOD BLESS.

This is an awful feeling when one loves so deeply.

Thank Goodness Some Dreams Do Not Come True
or are just a bad dream....

This is a fear that many think about William, a most powerful and touching write...
love and peace to you, Carole~

I love the "simplicity" of this, William. It is pure and crystal, just like how one thinks with such amazing clarity on first waking from a very vivid dream that delves deep into the emotions. Our inner thought life can often be the only thing that is keeping us alive, and we cherish it. This poem also highlights the priceless treasure that is memory... how life can ebb away when that goes. Bittersweetness here. Thank you, Kate xx

Powerfully written... well done!

Cheers,
Dan

How this pulls at the heart. Beautiful.

Very touching. Hugs,
Sheila

Striking in it's painful but real emotional worry for love that could someday fall apart.

Fee

Vow!! I find much inspiration in those words, for they have great profound meaning!!! Keep on allowing the Lord to inspire you.

i'll wipe away your tears... :)

LOVELY!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Believe me, Tarzan did the same when Jane left a Dear John letter!

Georg

These words come from a deeply rooted love. No fear, it was only a dream. I am sure you will never stop thinking of her....

Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

..inspiration in your words...as we need to embrace each day,,,heartfelt William.
Love and Blessings,
Christine

The dream must have been frightening, William. Dreams bring our fears to consciousness as well as our deepest feelings. So many times we hide our feelings under the guise of strength--until something like this brings them to the surface. The release of tears is the heart's comfort. Beautiful expression of your love for her...

Lin

Oh my..So sad but I can feel the love you have within these lines sweet man....have a wonderful and safe night OK..Hugsss

(((HUGS))) and prayer, William - hope you are okay.

Karla. :(

Bill,

Sad, but showing your love how much she means to you. Great.

Mary

That indeed would be a very sad day. Packed with emotion

So sad; hope you areo okay, William! You are ever in my prayers~

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

This I like, William. And what a sad day to contemplate.
-gene.