A Breeze (poem) by William Bonilla on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on September 8, 2009

Excellent write William!!!

Blessings
P.S. Continue to write!

Reviewed on July 26, 2009

Beautiful write....I felt as though I were floating on that breeze. Very well crafted poem.

Anna

Reviewed on July 18, 2009

I also find the wind (and its many personalities) to be a source of inspiration. Thank you for sharing this gift, William. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on July 11, 2009

Nothing like a good cool breeze William, just before I read your cool poem I stepped outside on the porch to catch the cool peaceful morning breeze before the day gets hot, good one, cheers

Reviewed by Mary Patterson

Reviewed on July 10, 2009

Beautiful and touching. The winds currents are every where...M

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on July 8, 2009

...AND NO MAN KNOWS WHERE THE WIND LISTETH...A WONDERFUL WRITE. GREAT PHRASES AND IMAGERY. GOD BLESS AND THANKS FOR SHARING. JOYCE

Reviewed by ~ H (Reader)

Reviewed on July 7, 2009

William, you have excelled with this one...just beautiful, Holly

Reviewed by Mary Coe

Reviewed on July 4, 2009

Loved it. An excellent write.

Reviewed by Morning Star

Reviewed on July 4, 2009

Ah William a very beautiful and cooling breeze
Your words captured such beautiful vividness
I could almost feel that breeze!
William I am so happy to be able to visit and read
at list today and maybe tomorrow YEAH!!!
Wishing you a safe and Happy 4TH
Yolie

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green

Reviewed on July 1, 2009

Ahhhh. That cool breeze you created was just the ticket! In the 90's here in Chapel Hill, North Carolina. . .and anyway, who doesn't need to ride a lost wild wind? To infinity, yet! This is lovely, William. Thank you so much for posting it. <3 'Pea' <3

Reviewed by Gwendolyn Thomas Gath

Reviewed on June 30, 2009

William enjoyed your cool "...Breeze"
Thank you for sharing.

All the best and take care
SEMPER FI'
~Gwendolyn

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on June 30, 2009

gorgeous write

Reviewed by Michelle Mead

Reviewed on June 30, 2009

I like how tightly this is written, no extra words to belabor the meaning, nice work, William.

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on June 30, 2009

Love This Poem William!...coming full circle & Being Embraced or maybe in this case caressed by Mother Nature's Breadth!
Love & Inspirations
Vickie

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle

Reviewed on June 30, 2009

Excellent poem,I enjoy reading it,take care

EDWIN

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on June 30, 2009

Soothing descriptions. I especially like the use of "wild", because it highlights freedom. Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on June 29, 2009

Being touched and cooled by a stray breeze on a hot and muggy day is a special gift, William...lovely the way you expressed this moment!
peace and love, Carole~

Reviewed by L. Figgins

Reviewed on June 28, 2009

Love this. Especially the last four lines! When I was a young child, I thought that I could direct the wind by waving my hands. This invisible force was so magical to me. Your poem reminded me of that. Beautiful. Thank you, William...

Lin

Reviewed by K. Mulroney

Reviewed on June 28, 2009

To meet the beginning of it's infinity. Wow, what a verse that is. This was very well done!

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on June 28, 2009

A gentle breeze are for flying small kites with smiles on it and tell God that one appreciate His gentle blowing on our faces.

Georg

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on June 28, 2009

A beautiful piece of heaven...

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on June 27, 2009

I can hear, smell and feel that Cool Breeze of a hot summer day. Nice poem, William, I am glad to see you back, alive and kicking!
Much peace, love, and light, my dearest friend,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on June 27, 2009

no better place to catch a breeze than at the beginning of infinity ...

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on June 27, 2009

i like this! well done!

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on June 27, 2009

A breezy read that cools while it invigorates...ed

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on June 27, 2009

You make it impossible for us not to read your words William. Thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Johanna Fields (Reader)

Reviewed on June 27, 2009

William,You have a way with words your poem is lovely.I enjoyed reading. Hugs, Johanna

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on June 27, 2009

We could use some of that breeze here; it's 102 outside; feels more like 201 degrees! Bleahh, it's HAWWWWWWWWWWWWT here in Texas! Great write, William; well penned! BRAVO!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Hell (Ah, er, TEXAS!), Karen Lynn. :p *sweating*

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on June 27, 2009

....and that is the way the wind blows...wonderful write William...felt a breeze from here.
Love and Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on June 27, 2009

Wonderful images.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on June 27, 2009

William, that is quite a wind, may
the thermals be smooth for you as
you journey afar!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on June 27, 2009

Beautiful poem!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva