She Was Black (poem) by William Bonilla on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by D Johnson

Reviewed on September 8, 2010

I agree with Andy...very well done.

Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed by Andy Turner

Reviewed on September 6, 2010

Oh heck. You lead me up the garden path. But jolly well done!

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on September 1, 2010

poetic story well versed William, black is beautiful, you did it justice here, cheers

Reviewed by Mary Coe

Reviewed on August 31, 2010

Such talent. Really held my attention. I would have sooooo scared!

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on August 31, 2010

Very well done dear man....cute real cute...stay safe and well..Hugssssss

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on August 31, 2010

What an ending...you are such a kind man William....cheers!

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on August 30, 2010

Oh William, you make me shiver from fright..Another surprise ending..and I was thinking something quite erotic at first...lol

Good one, you got us!

Peace, love and light,
Amber

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on August 30, 2010

Wow, you caught me off guard with this poem, William. Well done!
Sheila

Reviewed by Tiana ~ (Reader)

Reviewed on August 28, 2010

OMG Shoot me! Just the thought of it freaks me out. Thank goodness we don't have any in Hawaii! Another cleverly written poem, William! hugs

Reviewed by Christine Tsen

Reviewed on August 28, 2010

Oh, you frightened me because I too have had snakes in houses before!
This is wonderful ~ so well written William!!!
Blessings,
Christine

ps Black IS beautiful, have you ever seen a black butterfly? Beautiful!

Reviewed by Morning Star

Reviewed on August 27, 2010

William was it a Red-bellied Black Snake?
Either way i'm terrified of snakes
But i love this poem
Fantastic!!
Wishing you Peace Love and Light...Yolie

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on August 27, 2010

Your had me going for a short while William, no comments about the snake, since I am terrified of them all...
peace and love, Carole~

Reviewed by Donna Chandler

Reviewed on August 27, 2010

I love surprise endings. However, I was expecting a puppy or a kitten, certainly NOT a snake. Yikes!

Donna

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on August 27, 2010

You know, they really are beautiful creatures. Hard to remember sometimes that they are deadly. Well done William.

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila

Reviewed on August 27, 2010

Wow! Wasn't sure where this one was going, but enjoyed the journey! Surprise ending......love that!

Anna

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on August 27, 2010

releasing her a distance away,
into the wetlands of my domain

You're a good man, D'Artagnan. Most would have killed her. I like all critters, even snakes.

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on August 27, 2010

BEAUTIFUL POEM!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on August 27, 2010

I love the ending....what a surprise!

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on August 26, 2010

...with a clever, wicked twist, William...but so sensuous and alluring.

John

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on August 26, 2010

Beautiful indeed as I see her through your words William.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on August 26, 2010

WELL DONE, WITH A SURPRISE ENDING THAT, I MUST ADMIT, I DID NOT EXPECT. THANKS FOR SHARING YOUR GIFT SO BEAUTIFULLY. LOVE AND BLESSINGS, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill

Reviewed on August 26, 2010

They are very beautiful and the danger makes them even more so. Nice write!

Peace,
Dayvid

Reviewed by Richard King

Reviewed on August 26, 2010

Tricky, you had me for the first three stanzas. nicely done. I'd be Tempted to eliminate her rather than relocate her, but I suppose there must be a reason for them... Part of natures plan, I guess, but a dangerous part. Hope your other pets don't suffer as a result. Thanks Dick

Reviewed by TONY NERONE

Reviewed on August 26, 2010

I bet she was, William. Very tantalizing write and a very good one.

GOD BLESS YOU
TONY