A New Dawn (poem) by William Bonilla on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on April 10, 2011

Beautiful writing, William,
elegant, passionate, resonant.

John

Reviewed on April 8, 2011

Extremely well done,William. I like your idea creative poetry.
Peace
Tony

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on April 7, 2011

SOFT AND LOVELY WILLIAM...INDEED, A NEW DAWN. WRITTEN WITH ROMANTIC TENDERNESS. WELL DONE. THANKS FOR SHARING AND GOD BLESS. LOVE AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Don Juan Amante

Reviewed on April 7, 2011

not only romantic but very sensual. great work.

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on April 6, 2011

This beautiful poem is dusky and sensuous William...what a way to start a day!
peace and love, Carole~

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila

Reviewed on April 5, 2011

Phew!!!! Love the way this morning is beginning....yours is the second passionate sonnet I've read this morning.....awesome writing, my friend!

Anna

Reviewed by Diana Wiles

Reviewed on April 4, 2011

Words of rapture, so gently enchanting the reader..the red type mirroring the passion, really enhances the words significantly...

Hugs, Diana...

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on April 4, 2011

a passionate,sensual beauty,William

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on April 4, 2011

Breath taking sweet man...Hugsss keep well and always safe my dear friend
Love,
Chanti Lace xoxo

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on April 3, 2011

Such heated thoughts and warm sensuality exuded from each line but with a dash of love thrown in to sweeten the mix. Well done William.
fee

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on April 3, 2011

Wonderful writing, William; well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Texas, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Andy Turner

Reviewed on April 3, 2011

Up at the crack, of Dawn.

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on April 3, 2011

Ain't love grand.

Reviewed by Christine Tsen

Reviewed on April 3, 2011

Wow! This sparkles :)
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on April 3, 2011

HOT!

Reviewed by Gene Williamson

Reviewed on April 3, 2011

William, love the way this beauty flows from line to line
to the climax, that infinite ectasy. -gene.

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on April 3, 2011

Just what I needed to read on this beautiful (54 degrees) sunny afternoon.
I feel the urge to finish this one, it could have been a collaboration indeed my sweet collaborator..

Panting from total submission,
she moaned like a sated tigress.
His hands felt so good,
strong and knowing.

Only he could bring her to the peak,
that place where infinite ecstasy dwells,
where two lover's arrive
to glory in the sea of golden lava.

The dawning of a new day,
catapults the two lovers
into the reality of their union,
longing for more nights of pleasure.

Can each time be as good as the last,
time will tell,
ecstasy will prevail,
and A New Dawn has begun.

I guess I liked your poem, William...lol

Peace love and light,
Amber

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on April 3, 2011

A passionate piece, William. I like the contrast between the soft and the hard lines that are his traveling hands. Nicely penned!
Sheila

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on April 3, 2011

Why do I feel like taking a cold shower everytime I read you...? ;-)e