When? (poem) by William Bonilla on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on April 7, 2003

William,
I think one can do no more, than to paint the honesty, as it holds their soul that one day in time.
For no greater words do ride higher in beauty and impact in my view, than the ones that are strewn in honesty of heart.
I applaud the authors heart and words this day.
No William, few know the journey of which you do speak my friend, until the very day we arrive!
Rodney Evan Bohen

Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster

Reviewed on April 6, 2003

Great write...see your note about fictional...shoot, took all the fun out of my rather smart remark I was going to leave ;-) ~Trish~

Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy

Reviewed on April 5, 2003

Old is a state of mind, if you don't state it, you don't mind it! William, I was old when I was seven, and have been getting younger ever since. It's like my weight, I'm working my way back to my original weight, 7 lbs 9 ounces! Seriously, loved the poem, and I think, Sir, that you will be young of heart at 120!

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on April 5, 2003

as long as creativity pumps through our veins, we can never get old...

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on April 5, 2003

It's a wonderful poem. Glad we aren't there quite yet!

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on April 5, 2003

Well I am glad to hear it is fictional. You aren't old until you reach 100. Then you should slow down a bit. [smiles] Well done, William. You write the neatest poetry.

Reviewed by john zimmerman

Reviewed on April 5, 2003

i simply refuse to be
old.

this is a good write

john+

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on April 5, 2003

hahahahahah....that started way back when the "I DO" came into my life........lol
now I am no "tigerlily" anymore....but a real pedagree "Cactus"
Love
Tinka

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on April 5, 2003

William,
This is poignant and beautifully done.
Chrissie

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on April 5, 2003

This was sad! ~ But people must allow themselves to grow old gracefully.

Both beautiful and heartfelt!

Sandie Angel :o) a.k.a. May Lu $*_*$

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on April 5, 2003

This was quite moving, very sad, but beautifully done,

Reindeer

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on April 5, 2003

A fine write, which sometimes applies even to young men when they become jaded, life becomes meaningless. I really don't believe it's the age as much as it is the attitude. We can't let age defeat us;-)

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)

Reviewed on April 5, 2003

Hey William, your excellent write is in reference to me I know:)

yf
tony

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on April 5, 2003

I am not that old, this is one of my fictional pieces

William