To: all My Friends At The Den,
I'm introducing a new pair,
of young poetess,
Gabrielle & Brianna Lodato,
4 years old Twins
My Grand daughetrs,
They learn, from watching me write.
#1. The Mouse
(Gabi)
I've never seen a mouse
Not in school
Nor in the yard
Not in the Zoo
Nor in the Lawn
I've never seen a mouse
Not even in my house.
(PaPa BilL)
House mouse
Mouse house.
~~~~~~*~~~~~~
By: Gabrielle Lodato
& PaPa Bill
5/19/03
#2. The Spider
(Gabi)
I think there is
A spider
Crawling on my head
Walking towards my knees
Making me scream.
(PaPa Bill)
I scream
You scream
Ice cream.
~~~~~~*~~~~~~
By: Gabrielle Lodato
& PaPa Bill
5/19/03
#3. The LadyBug
(Bri)
I love the spots
On your back
Said the Caterpillar
To the LadyBug
Thank you
You ugly thing
Said the LadyBug.
(PaPa Bill)
Don't feel bad
Ms. Caterpillar
When you grow up
You'll become a beautiful
Butterfly
The Queen of The Garden,
The Monarch.
~~~~~~*~~~~~~
BY: Brianna Lodato
&
PaPa Bill
5/19/03
#4. The Butterfly
(Bri)
In our Garden
A pretty Butterfly
Landed on my shoulder
She whispered
Into my ears.
(PaPa Bill)
Loving melodies
Of beautiful
Little girls
From all over this
Wonderful world.
~~~~~~*~~~~~~
By: Brianna Lodato
&
PaPa Bill
5/19/03
Adorable..baybe I will be a grandma one day too....(soon)..hehehe!!
Love
Tinka
Reviewed by Debra Stiles, The Original Mister (Reader)
Reviewed on May 19, 2003
That is the most wonderful thing. The greatest pleasure in the world is watching your gandbabies learn. I Know!
Bravo little princess's!
Mister
Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on May 19, 2003
This was so cute, William.
They have talent! Even at such a young age.
tony
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on May 19, 2003
Oh William this isexcellent give them new poets hugs for me.
Peggy
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on May 19, 2003
Love the lady bird, sprogs have away of such inocence, shame the world tries to rob them of it, loved all these, you must be proud, for sure..Well done grandpar...
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I hope your granddaughters will continue to write poetry. ~MoNi~
Chrissie
This is just so precious.
Love it...:)
Trixie
Love
Tinka
Bravo little princess's!
Mister
They have talent! Even at such a young age.
tony
Peggy
Nancy