Come into my spirit,
energize my mind
look into my soul
two, but one...in kind
likeness of the other
image of a man
heart of kindness
reaching...
holding out the hand
fingertips that kiss
a touch connects
these two
eyes meet to greet
the other
these images of you
caught in breaths of reason
searching eyes of blue
holding hopes in check
for now
new friends, just us two
laughter of a lonely pair
merging two as one
hopes to smile that meet
to keep
see what can be done
wine to sate and smooth
the edge
needed to induce
easy gate ,let go
don't hedge
the process of these two
distance is the mistress
smiles to draw her in
passion the award
in time
meeting of two friends.
strangers in a lonely world
caught in eyes so true
blending one to each
a whole
two for one...
and you.
You've penned the hopeful reason for being... for each of us. Superb work of an accomplished wordsmith; one who knows the subject from whence..... - Bill, The Observer
Tantalizing and slightly teasing, kinda mischievous but very enticing, glimpses of possibilities and alluring scenarios...all this and more are offered in this sweet write and dreamscape of hopes and wishes.
I sense the fusion going on here Susan, beautifully interwoven two for one. Lots of passion in subtle tones...
fine poem!
Love,
Eileen
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on April 10, 2006
Great vibes coming from this two'fer, Susan. Painting a tenetative lovers kaleidoscope of looks and smiles and touches, hopes for the future and but content with the sensuousness of the moment. Gotta love it!
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Ron
And as Jerry says, Gotta love it. And I do. A pleasure to read and experience your words today--thank you. :) Well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Jerry as usual is bang on the money !
I can neither add or subtract from his insightful comments below !
Peter
Felix
fine poem!
Love,
Eileen