Mirror images and light
Refractions of a minute
Dated portrait inset
Pains are merely hinted
Fine line of a feather
Brushed with artists hands
Justifying moments
Hourglass in sands
Shadows in a mirror
Etched in time array
Fevered second photo
Seclusion in the grays
This woman like a rose in time
Make-upped face a glow
Breathing in this second
Another breath she glows
Aloof and charming angel
Rose of cardinal red
Visions of an angel
Love and tender fed
Careful is the image
Always looking back
Intelligence of wisdom
With mirror imaged tact.
Our days are fading fast Someday we'll all be on the outside lookin in hopefully with grace and wisdom. This is the sadness and the hope of life. Excellent. Pierre.
As if surrounded by mirrors, all reflecting the different facets of ourselves as others see us and on second look as we percieve ourwselves...oh the flaws we see that no one else does...we should take a minute to remember to look to others for our reflection. Awesome write GF!
Love, Taylor
Right on, Susan! We all fool around with this love thing, and you are one of the msater of it. But, here you show a deeper and wiser side of an intelligentand serious writer. Kudos and all them there words go to you, this day.
- Bill
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on October 17, 2006
My mirror loves me.
Very intelligent poem...
Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on October 16, 2006
The mirror reflects the truth. Beauty is important.
the mirrored image that remains intact will always reflect the wisdom and beauty of its design ... the clarity of your scope is quite remarkable, Susan ...
Reviewed by Simon Barreiros (Reader)
Reviewed on October 16, 2006
Nicely written image of a woman come into her own as they call it. Her beauty growing deeper within spreading outward upon her features. If a diamond could see itself in a mirror what fantastic lights would she see? Keep up the beautiful work, you are a jewel.
yours,
simon
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Love, Taylor
The mirror never lies. :) A thought provoking, excellent pen you've presented; BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Beaitufullt written
Love & Peace
William
This is beautiful poetry..
Technically brilliant
Love and Blessings
Peter
- Bill
Very intelligent poem...
yours,
simon
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Love & Peace, Dove