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A Tree On Blood Mountain
by Susan K. de Vegter → (All Poetry by Susan K. de Vegter)
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I found this tree while on a fishing trip with my father and uncle to North Georgia.


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There's a tree high in the mountains which once was just a tree
Now it stands and grows so proudly and shares this new personality
The heart of it is showing with tightly bonded letters
It smiles like it is human although that doesn't matter
Only to these two lovers whose names immortalize
The initials of these spirits who made her bark their prize
She stands with force a plenty, their passion now she carries
Along with inner voices that spirits up and married
No legal words for riches and treasures etched in bark
Its a written word of promise and the passions with their spark
Its the sacred oath of lovers who share in natures way
The promises of hearts to hold with growing day to day
In a secret hidden cove where the rhododendron blooms
In the bowers of her foliage when the mighty thunder booms
In the spring or in the winters, in the fall when leaves turn gold
Their hearts immortal promise gives warmth to all the cold
Their tree is but the foothold and speaks of love so true
In the mountain cove for lovers lives but, this silent clue
Of the two whose hearts beat freely in a cadence-echoed sound
In this cove high on Blood Mountain, love grows on sacred ground.

© 2000 Susan Kathryn de Vegter


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 Reviews of "A Tree On Blood Mountain"
Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on March 11, 2007
From such stuff legends are born. Unfortunately, if K and B married, they are probably now divorced.

Ron

Reviewed on March 11, 2007
Took me to a line from the Beatles' song, 'No one else is in my tree, I mean it must be high or low'.
When I was a kid I had a tree that I used to retreat to, climb up to a thick fork in the branches,and sit watching time slip quietly by. Not so much my name but my footprints were tattooed into the the forearm of this tree.

Spark of nostalgia in this prose, Susan.
Dai

Reviewed by Butch Howard (Reader)
Reviewed on March 11, 2007
How perfectly romantic to find this simple symbol of love and then be moved to write such a lovely poem about your impressions of discovering it. I like the way you draw the connection between nature and human love in this. Your word choice is creative and unique. Great poem!
~Butch

Reviewed by cecil hickman
Reviewed on March 10, 2007
beautiful words that came from such a simple but loving notice very well done with such creativity from a talented poet,,,blessings...Cecil

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on March 10, 2007
ohhhhhhh
what a fantastic premise
this could be a book
loved it

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on March 10, 2007
"Of the two whose hearts beat freely in a cadence echoed sound..." this line alone is a treasure to save and cherish in my heart forever, combined with all the rest of the perfect lines in this write I am in awe. Well done my sweet dear Susan.
Hugs
Fee

Reviewed by CJ Heck
Reviewed on March 10, 2007
A very romantic write, Susan. I could almost envision this pair, feeling so much love and carving away at the tree to leave their mark for the future. Makes you wonder what happened between them in the ensuing years. Well done.
Love,
CJ

Reviewed by Michael Mathieu (Reader)
Reviewed on March 10, 2007
Makes me wonder if they're still together as a couple,Well written my friend,

Michael

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on March 10, 2007
Wonderful tribute to K & B where ever they are!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed on March 10, 2007
Being one who's carved a few trees I can relate to this pen. Enjoyed

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on March 10, 2007
A beautiful tribute to undying love. Brings wonderful thoughts that they are still together and make a yearly pilgrimage to renew this vow. A heart warming write. Lady J

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on March 10, 2007
What a gifted poet you are Susan , love holly

Reviewed by F William Broome
Reviewed on March 10, 2007
Your love for love in the mountains shines through. This is an enchanting tale of two who left their mark. Blood mountain as its dark side, including a movie using the words in its title. You redeem all the bad about that part of our mountains. I love the tale you tell or this tale of two back in '93. - bill

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on March 10, 2007
Again fantasic flow, so i guess kate butnside has a siver berch tree.
Nice to know love grows somewhere lol...
A tree-iffic inspired poem, enjoyable too..

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on March 10, 2007
Love the thought expressed in this delightful poem.

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on March 9, 2007
Nicely written poetry representing nature and a secret love.
Be safe,
Karen


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