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What Would You do?
by Susan K. de Vegter → (All Poetry by Susan K. de Vegter)
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What Would You Do On A Rainy Afternoon?

"Hey Sweetheart", she said from another room.

He sensed her, knew she was there....somewhere.

He tought, at least he heard her. She hummed in a whisper..."Hey
Sugar," ... there it is again.

Up until now she was a thought. And inquisitive moment now and then that
passed his mind.

Its rained for the better part of 100% today. Its taken a day to make metal
cold... through and through... and even the bones of those working out in
the elements.

He calls this change in weather a contrast and she sees it as a womans
perogative for change.

Afterall, Mother Nature is a woman and she also has the right to allow us
the opportunity to notice her new outfits in the Fall.

A man would whine at so many changes and so many mouths to feed.

A woman would always find a way to feed her babies.

A man would make a comfortable haven for his loved ones while a woman would see that all is fed and put down for the night.

A man would grin for his mate afterwards and the woman would smile from
inside comfortably.

Its our world and it's nature and passion and rain with a soothing and mellow
suggestion for the eveing.

"What would I do?" ... he asked this before her... 'What do you do indoors
with me?" he asked her again.

"Hey honey"...she smiled and he felt it...her eyes spoke silently.

It is the way of he and she. The tease and the underlying tenderness of two
good spirits trying to tingle the other while neither knows the others real
spiritual depth.

Its waiting for time.

"What pleasures you on a rainy cold day?" the words flew around corners and
exercized the empty spaces with warm currents.

"Its more than the thrill of a soft pillow or the warm moistness of the flesh...
its anticipation of an ease that is charmed with silence and the air
that comes alive in a single charge of passion. "He heard her words...

She always tastes them before she spits them out.

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 Reviews of "What Would You do?"
Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on October 23, 2007
And she has good taste , like you, Suze!

Ron

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on October 9, 2007
The world of men and women - so different, but when "he heard her words" they spoke the same language.

Kathy

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on October 8, 2007
Susan,
You always make me think, umm, on a rainy day, I would light candles all over the house, chill some sinfully delicious wine, made an Italian dinner to the nines, and dress in silk and lace and seduce the hell out of my man...Now I have to find him first however..so it better not rain for a while..lol
I love your poem..
Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on October 7, 2007
What would I do? Ah

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on October 7, 2007
Its our world, and it's nature and passion and rain, with a soothing and mellow suggestion for the evening.

And you paint it extremely well!

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on October 7, 2007
words, emotions and experiences such be savored before they are transfixed ...

i like the sexual connotation in the final line ...

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on October 7, 2007
...a passion play...on a rainy day. A puddle on each side of the rode...perhaps waiting for one to crossover...from what one might do...to what pleasures one...two ways of looking at it.
well done Susan...
John

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on October 6, 2007
What would I do?
Love her........back!!

Walt

Reviewed on October 6, 2007
Holysmokes, Susan, this one heats up the Den! Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on October 6, 2007
Enjoyed this write, keeps the readers attention throughout! However, I have a hard time recalling the rainy days...we are in a severe drought here in the mountains of Kentucky...anxiously awaiting the rain day by day! Beautifully written!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on October 6, 2007
Such sensuosity weaves through this repartee and the fire builds with each response, l Love the mood and manner in this psssionate gem Susan!

ET

Reviewed by Art Hernandez
Reviewed on October 6, 2007
Anticipation is more than just a word or thought...it is everything when meditated through love...


nice work...


Art Sun...

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson
Reviewed on October 6, 2007
This was written very well Susan. It keeps the readers attention throughout...nicely done

Allen

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on October 6, 2007
She always tastes them before she spits them out. <---How did you know one of my chat up lines?

OMG I must be weird cos poems like this make me even more broody, i love the 2am wake up, special time call...
Thrill of a face on a pillow case, i kinda think is my ex yanky g/f's mission...

Weird where ones poem takes yer...

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on October 6, 2007
very interesting and well written

Reviewed by rite
Reviewed on October 6, 2007
Your concluding line reflects a most excellent thought. We know nothing except for the feelings in our hearts. Basically what we can express is not what we are capable of or just a sign of the limited power of words that fail to express what we feel. These were words to dream on. Thank you for creating and sharing. Take care, precious Muse,

U

Reviewed by Ted Bossis
Reviewed on October 6, 2007
I'll call someone where it's raining & get another opinion---love Ted


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