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Try To Behave
by Susan K. de Vegter → (All Poetry by Susan K. de Vegter)
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The first of passions with a faceless memory and the youthful lessons of a nubile girl.

~*SKdeV*~


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Midnight's dark moon aflow on the waves
Innocence calling- "try to behave"
Silhouettes bond on beaches’ white sands
Walking embraced... hands gripping hands
Thoughts all together, a sameness festooned
Hearts raw and beating under this moon
Louder the silence of midnight forsakes
Two lover's passion... pushing their brakes
Each step of innocence comes a new dare
Caressing this mystery and pleasuring cares
Reaching for something , risking their ruin
Touching the rhythm of their own wrong-doing
Collapsing on sand dunes...legs weaving slow
Bathed in the moonlight's phosphorous glow
Body's heaving with each rushing wave
It's too late now as nothing behaves
Moisture is beading as energies fly
Arching to arches...moans meeting sighs
Thunderous lightening with no storm in sight
A dance with the devil in the pale moonlight.

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 Reviews of "Try To Behave"
Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on October 15, 2007
Incredible imagery and write. Youth - it is hard to behave when you're caught-up in THAT moment.

Kathy

Reviewed by Simon Barreiros (Reader)
Reviewed on October 15, 2007
Really nicely written. Tension, sensuality, and youthful curiousity rolling up like waves on your shore line.
simonb3

Reviewed by Pierre Ortega
Reviewed on October 14, 2007
Innocence knows no behavior, wonderful write,

Love, Pierre

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on October 14, 2007
Left me wishing I was there, and... breathless!

Ron

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on October 14, 2007
The Devil made 'em do it.

Walt

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on October 14, 2007
Get outta the way devil, I know what I'm doing!!! Beautifully done . . .

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on October 14, 2007
Dancing with the devil in the pale moonlight - marvelous!

Reviewed by Ted Bossis
Reviewed on October 14, 2007
All realism starts with energy ~ Devil is nonexistent ~love & goodness~Ted

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on October 14, 2007
Very, very well said and felt Susan. Superbly written.

Reviewed by Edwin Larson
Reviewed on October 14, 2007
Sensual and liberating write...Don't ever start behaving...;)

Edwin

Reviewed on October 13, 2007
Holysmokes, Susan, me monitor just melted...whoo! EXCELLENT.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on October 13, 2007
Susan you know we can't behave sis;-)This is captivating,overflowing with passion!oo la la! Enjoy!;-)


Love,
ET

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on October 13, 2007
luv the atmosphere and imagery to this poem, Susan ...

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on October 13, 2007
You have been writing for a while, and I enjoyed this one, no matter when it was written. Very wonderful pen here Susan.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on October 13, 2007
well written poem-

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on October 13, 2007
A Beautiful sensuous write Susan
most enjoyable reading
Peace & love be with you

William


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