If For a Moment (poem) by Susan K. de Vegter on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on February 1, 2008

Shouldn't love be this way...passionately enfolded within the grasp...and expressed within thought...

nice work, Susan...

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on January 21, 2008

Distance makes the heart grow fonder, but closeness smothers. Mother, what a choice!

Ron

Reviewed by Barbara Smith

Reviewed on January 21, 2008

Susan, this is such a beautiful romantic poem of a lover desiring to be with their true love. You paint an amazing picture of two people in love and sharing it. What could be better?

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on January 21, 2008

This sends out waves of love and longing across the miles of air space to the person who so captivates your heart. It is better to love and be loved like this than to make love just for the sake of making love to someone near. Very nicely done dear Susan...
hugs
Fee

Reviewed by stan nassano

Reviewed on January 21, 2008

I'm feeling the love here Susan.........at first it seemed a distant past love untill i read on ......and removed all doubt.nicely done
>stan

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on January 21, 2008

Quite passionate, Susan! And what a gorgeous graphic.

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on January 21, 2008

Oh that cosmic link of love
what a passionate poem of yearning, so vivid drawing the line blurred betwen the cerebral and the actual....like a rehershal for the climax. Your poetry must be his seduction and release on a very personal and amazing level....sigh
pax A

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on January 20, 2008

so much love--i am struck with the same feeling that you write of your loss of "Lil Rosebud" beautifully coreographed with your words

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo

Reviewed on January 20, 2008

The strength of love and its beauty certainly make me long for me - if only for a moment. I suspect this is a follow-up to "Lil Rosebud". It speaks to me of longing and wanting that which ...

God bless you. Kathy

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on January 20, 2008

Wow! Passion pouring out of every word! The flame never extinguished! HOT poem Sis,a lovers gem!

Love,
ET

Reviewed by Pierre Ortega

Reviewed on January 20, 2008

This is absolutely beautiful, and someday soon your yearning will be
quelled and your wishes will come true!

Love, Pierre

Reviewed by John Leko

Reviewed on January 20, 2008

...a love chain...this pen...passion upon passion...holding onto one forever.
well done Susan...
John

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on January 20, 2008

Susan,

Such y e a r n i n g in passionate lines of beauty...well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson

Reviewed on January 20, 2008

This is good Susan...I really enjoyed the emotion here....excellent.

Allen

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on January 20, 2008

Wishes do come true. Much passion in this yearning poem.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on January 20, 2008

Beautiful write, Susan; very well penned and imaged! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Ted Bossis

Reviewed on January 20, 2008

Oh my goodness_Such a ripened peach you are~ellevoov~TedSo

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on January 20, 2008

I can feel the heart warming love and passion in this write Susan. Very well said my friend.