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While Searching for a Memory
by Susan K. de Vegter → (All Poetry by Susan K. de Vegter)
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I went up to the mountains
Looking for a memory
I learned that simple air
Isn't what it used to be
The constant rush of everyday
Distorts the facts of life
There I just l-e-t i-t g-o
Releasing pent up strife
My muscles suddenly talked to me
When before they burned complete
Tension had me combustionable
I was my own defeat
My smile was much more generous there
I think I broke my face
I enhaled without coughing up
Old city smog's after-taste
My eyes were much more greener
The redness was all gone
My step had spring
I scaled the blue
Recalling this , my home
You've heard of mountain magic
As far as my eyes could see
I found what I'd been missing
While searching for a memory
I lost myself, as I recall
When living was more pure
Since man became responsible
It's worsened now, I'm sure
I flew right through working hard
To gain the material boon
The material comes to own you
It happens all too soon
We want much more than we can keep
When we are called away
We leave the same as we came in
It's life we need to pay
The simple joy of fresh air
Nature's green abyss
Is all coming to an end
Then this will all be missed
The sky's so blue in Highlands
As far as one can see
It's what we take for granted
While searching for a memory.



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 Reviews of "While Searching for a Memory"
Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on November 1, 2009
In your heart your step will always be young and your mind will always be a path to beauty in your words...lovely write Susan.
hugs
fee

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on November 1, 2009
Your memory for words requires no searching. I, too, can find myself in mountains. So glad you're back. Thought I'd lost ou.

Ron

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on October 30, 2009
This is really beautiful. I could picture this and long for such a thing. Well done. LadyJ

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on October 30, 2009
Susan, isn't life grand! Always living in the moment, never harboring negativity. It's healthier and much more zen! Good to see you back, this poem speaks to me.
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed on October 30, 2009
Stunning write, Susan, with searing emotion and images - well done! Agree with J.Allen, you've been missed. Welcome home!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Aubrey Hammack
Reviewed on October 30, 2009
I like this a lot. I often think of how things get in my way of really living. The simple joys of which you speak have always made me the happiest.

Reviewed by KJ McPhee
Reviewed on October 30, 2009
My heart is definitely in the highlands with this poem, susan. The mountain greenery where God paints the scenery.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on October 30, 2009
When I think of beautiful country and the sumptuousness of nature I recall the high country of Wyoming the short time I was there. There was magic there. When I stood on a precipice and looking down into a deep valley I got the sense of something II have never quite regained. A spiritual sense. And when I looked toward the sky I was covered with the fullness of "being." Wow! My memories are have been shaken loose / Great poem, with some lasting passages . . .

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on October 30, 2009
Beautifully said, Susan.

Reviewed by Eugene Williams
Reviewed on October 29, 2009
We want much more than we can keep "

never truer words were spoken your mind is a gift share it with the world.....

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on October 29, 2009
excellent writing-beautiful and refreshing

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson
Reviewed on October 29, 2009
It is so good to see you back in form...your poetic excellence has been missed

Allen


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