Inside every person is a place where heaven mends
A garden of all passions where most of man pretends
This Shangri' La of pleasures and roasted love on high
Oasis of all tenderness, made richer for the sighs
Where loving is unselfish and the flesh is in control
Where the heart of Souls, the Spirit ... build it's own atoll
Each dance of flesh is gentle...each moment flows with ease
When humming starts to moan just as the fissures start to seethe
Each bud on nipples, smiling...deep fuschias moist and bold
As harder he approaches til spirits grab and hold
He enters every crevice ... revels to every push
Then pulls upon his power as pulses start to rush
Then breathes are taken faster, each heave a boosted thrust
Euphorically this plain unfolds as dams begin to burst
He opens up a river ... as love's fluids begin
Another push, it flows the more, three times it floods on in
There is no feeling like it...as awesome as it comes
When love is finally set free and passions head on home
Each move with him, a symphony...each tender touch is blessed
Spiritually enigmatic...pleasure bound, and yet...
Our minds desire to capture each second that love showers
As hearts rebound in rapture...so private and all ours.
Most people never know it...their love is merely lust
With him it is Utopia...when passions give it up
Shangri' La or Heaven...whatever springs from love
It comes to few in this world...where their love is a shove
When selfishness enables but one to occupy
This climactic time of sharing...then leaves most love deprived
My love ...he is my spirit and he has but one sure form
His passion brought me Heaven when his Shangri' La came home.
The author probably received showers of blessings from Erato to compose this
"HEAVEN AND SHANGRI'LA"...It is the mystery of unification procreating wonders in the womb of eternity to please Nature with the hymn of conception like the first green bough from the tree of satiation after the universal deluge of love. This is written with words that picture feelings with the quills of imagination smoothen with Aphrodite’s ICHOR to feast Apollo.
Author-Poet Susan Kathryn Rowse, you have delivered a piece of art depicting emotions poetized for eternity.
NEVER REST YOUR PEN; DON’T LET YOUR QUILLS DRY.
My admiration and respect.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Reviewed by Trip
Reviewed on February 18, 2003
This describes a special pair. You should write a book about this experience as it is Utopia.
Susan...this is a great write..clap clap clap...wonderful flow ...cheers...love n luck...BHUWAN
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on February 17, 2003
Susan,
Exquisite and flowing in beauty
Peace
Peg
Reviewed by Eileen
Reviewed on February 17, 2003
Susan this is awesome! truly an enthralling piece of work and can't get much better than this...the art also...what a treat! Thank you...
Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)
Reviewed on February 17, 2003
whewww wow steamy and artistically beautifull this was amazingly wonderful oh wow talk about describing so vivdly you did such amarvelous job on this WOW!!
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"HEAVEN AND SHANGRI'LA"...It is the mystery of unification procreating wonders in the womb of eternity to please Nature with the hymn of conception like the first green bough from the tree of satiation after the universal deluge of love. This is written with words that picture feelings with the quills of imagination smoothen with Aphrodite’s ICHOR to feast Apollo.
Author-Poet Susan Kathryn Rowse, you have delivered a piece of art depicting emotions poetized for eternity.
NEVER REST YOUR PEN; DON’T LET YOUR QUILLS DRY.
My admiration and respect.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Tripper
Most So Excellent!
TRASK
Exquisite and flowing in beauty
Peace
Peg
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