The art, "Adagio" is by my artist friend Ty Wilson and with his permission.
www.tywilson.com
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Punctuated Sighs
If I could smile discreetly and have him see my face
If winds of chance would take me in and in this breath I take
To fly o're lands of beauty ... land as a fallen leaf
To dwell beside his park bench and let him grin in peace
He knows that I am with him regardless of the miles
He reaches down for colors the wind brought with my smile
To circle just his shoulders and warm his chill away
To greet this man so fully and have him say "please stay"
Its dreaming but its comfort...its tears that fill my eyes
My darling friend I love you with punctuated sighs.
Susan, One of my favorites of yours. Superb Write. The subject matter and the flow were excellent.
Reviewed by Cherokee Sage (Reader)
Reviewed on March 20, 2003
Very passionate poem, pretty lady.
I hope that hand of yours is healed.
I took your advice and emailed about my account here. I seemed to have fallen through the cracks.
Peace,
Cherokee
I met Jerome on a busy city street in Baltimore, Maryland, when he was forty-five years old. On that particular day, I was out and about, enjoying a much-needed day off from work.
I wanted to purchase a sukiyaki sub. I parked my car in an area of
I met Jerome on a busy city street in Baltimore, Maryland, when he was forty-five years old. On that particular day, I was out and about, enjoying a much-needed day off from work.
I wanted to purchase a sukiyaki sub. I parked my car in an area of
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divine passion.
William
Yes, this is a passionate write..
The art work..
the lingering passion is all so clear.
I hope that hand of yours is healed.
I took your advice and emailed about my account here. I seemed to have fallen through the cracks.
Peace,
Cherokee