This was written on my day off, enjoying the outside music at the Gazebo Cafe during the Jazz Festival. It was a magic Sunday.
--Susan*
Sitting here on Decater Street
Listening to the Blues
Sipping down Jambalaya Juice
Trying to catch a groove
Magic blooms in colors here
People exuding their auras
Hiding every ounce of tears
For a fading heart_ what horror!
Red beans and rice
Strangers...nice
Dogs dining in with the guests
Frosted drinks, a Hurricane
All New Orleans best
This mystery city competes today
With a living Hell
Placing a beat back into a heart
Just where a blossom fell
Its magic what a city can do
To a broken heart
With music and color and laughter
It brings together what's been ripping apart
The soul of a woman in sufferage
Who loves laughing as well as the Blues
Who sits with the smile of an angel
While walking in others' shoes
This city can make into miracles
The oozing of hearts torn to Hell
Color in the hole that is missing
Just where a blossom fell.
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Reviews of "A Blossom Falls"
Reviewed by Marco Landi (Reader)
Reviewed on May 9, 2003
wonderful poem " a Blossom Falls" I smell the fragrance even if the petals are aging
You've described it perfectly, pretty lady. I hope my information on stalkers was helpful.
Peace,
Cherokee
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on May 7, 2003
Susan, Oh this one is so excellent I felt like I spent the day with you music, sipping coolers this is excellent
Peggy
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on May 7, 2003
Sounds emit from your words. Blusey and sad and exotic. Sweetness dappled with a bit of downhome spice is what I smell as you tarry beneath the magnolia tree. I hear the words. I taste the words. Doesn't everyone?
A passionate and poignant memoir written by a woman whose life has been guided by the words: "I am here to learn how to love well." The book is a deep examination of relationships, family, motivation, and honoring of the Self.
wonderful poem " a Blossom Falls" I smell the fragrance even if the petals are aging
Reindeer
~Nikki~
Love
Tinka
Peace,
Cherokee
Peggy
LOVED IT SUSAN
WILLIAM
well crafted
john +