This is for that special person who has always been dedicated .
~SKR~
Why can't this be difficult?
Why can't this hurt like Hell?
Why does this all feel easy?
And what is this magic spell?
My God I've known you always
Well it seems that way to me
You fit like you're my shadow
In a spirit meant to be
Your hands are an easy comfort
Your smile is even more
Your voice gives me shivers
My feet won't touch the floor
I love you nice n' easy
Pure sugar, raw-uncured
As natural as the air I breath
Dedicated and matured
I feel you in me always
You're a cushion of delight
Thoughts of you light my days
Then passion up my nights
I've written of pure passion
I know just how it feels
To color every nerve I have
Erupt at night _ then spill
Over into the dreams I dream
The ones that bring you here
The ones of yearning filled at last
Erasing all the years
Did you know that I'm your garden?
Just waiting for your care?
In wholesome love with freedom's will
With not a pain to share?
I love you nice n' easy
Few ever get this chance
To love unselfish love like this
Then rise on up to dance
With me in rolling thunder
With lightening all around
To love with Gods rejoicing
As the Universe resounds
Harmonious love-making
The kind without a name
A dance of synchronization
Lighting an eternal flame
I love you nice n' easy
The sort that's hard to find
Love that is this special
Never looks behind!
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Reviews of "Nice n' Easy"
Reviewed by ***** ********* (Reader)
Reviewed on September 30, 2003
Wow.
Susan, I am in awe of such a waterfall, such an explosion of emotion and sensation! It takes real courage to be this nakedly expressive! Wonderful, wonderful write!
Reviewed by Marco Landi (Reader)
Reviewed on September 26, 2003
well done Susan...great moments are here..
Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on September 23, 2003
A lovely tribute filled with some advice!
~Nikki~
Reviewed by Kevin Mc Crum (Reader)
Reviewed on September 23, 2003
So many great lines her but this one I liked the most.
"Your hands are an easy comfort
Your smile is even more
Your voice gives me shivers
My feet won't touch the floor"
At first I thought of Tina Turner's intro to Proud Mary, and then you pulled off a nice and easy little piece. Wanted to change one word, ... Did you know that I'm your garden?
Just waiting for your care? (till?) Well better quit poking around.
(Richard M. Feldman) Ever since I was a young boy, the only thing I wanted to be was a cowboy. I wanted to own and work on a real ranch, with cattle and horses. Especially horses.
While I never became a cowboy, considering everything I have done
(Richard M. Feldman) Ever since I was a young boy, the only thing I wanted to be was a cowboy. I wanted to own and work on a real ranch, with cattle and horses. Especially horses.
While I never became a cowboy, considering everything I have done
TRUE STORY. Bella survived an abusive powerbroker father with organized crime ties, a drug-addicted mother and a physically/sexually abusive brother. Shocking & inspirational. When she couldn't cry, she tattooed a crying angel to cry for her.
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Susan, I am in awe of such a waterfall, such an explosion of emotion and sensation! It takes real courage to be this nakedly expressive! Wonderful, wonderful write!
~Nikki~
"Your hands are an easy comfort
Your smile is even more
Your voice gives me shivers
My feet won't touch the floor"
Great write.
love Tinka
Reindeer
Just waiting for your care? (till?) Well better quit poking around.
Pure sugar, raw-uncured
As natural as the air I breath
Dedicated and matured"
WOW! what poetry. Outstanding!
May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)