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My Sin
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My sin was loving you, yes my sin was true

My mind thought of you, and then you made me blue

Maybe some day we will meet for real, and you may think big deal

Once I was a navy man all  spotless and brave, I had carried a two hundred pound woman to save

If I was to do it again if I could, maybe this time I would die like I should

I do not want to sin any more, because she does not adore

I hurt a lady from the moon, that was not my intent to swoon

Yes my sin was loving you, now it is me whom is so very blue

 

 

TONY MIKE NERONE
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Reviewed on October 12, 2010
love is the most precious gift we share with each other
how can there be so much pain?

Love ^ Blessings Tony
Vickie

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on October 5, 2010
Heartfelt Tony~

Reviewed by J'nia Fowler
Reviewed on October 5, 2010
It is difficult to hold back the heart which wants only to love. Well penned Tony.

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on October 5, 2010
Lovely writing..you have a beautiful heart Tony...sighhh...keep smiling dear friend...Hugsss

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on October 5, 2010
LOVELY!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on October 4, 2010
Heartfelt and melancholy~
Tony, I don't think that is sin to love someone, even if she cares for you as a friend. It can be a lovely friendship and you must not blame yourself.
Be well and blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on October 4, 2010
This is so tender and loving, I really can feel your sadness, please don't be sad embrace each day and try to feel up and get on with living. You have so much to live for. Women will always come and go but you will always have your friends.

Please try to cheer up, and be well.
Much peace, love and light,
Amber

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on October 4, 2010
Sincere and right to the point. Well done.

Reviewed by Margaret Mullings
Reviewed on October 4, 2010
Tony, I admire your honesty in your writings....they are very heartfelt and impacting! Truth set one free! May the Lord heal,
strengthen, and surround you with His presence today! Be encouraged
at this very moment! Thank you for sharing your thoughts, and
remember we all have sinned....yet their is always forgiveness!

Much Love,
Margaret

Reviewed on October 4, 2010
powerful write, Tony !

Reviewed by Emile Tubiana
Reviewed on October 4, 2010
Dear Tony, Very nicely written. I like this line:'"Yes my sin was loving you, now it is me whom is so very blue" Love Emile


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