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Love Takes
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
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Lights camera action
I can't get no satisfaction
Love always makes
its subtraction
ends up being less of a fraction
The more we give
the more others take
Too much jive azz  fake
so goes the heart break

Momma was there
daddy didn't care
Subtract one
hold on I'm not done
Big brother can't be found
for years he's never been around
Phony azz friends soak
most of their bull will
make one choke

If love was a crook
it could write the book
I'm a poet
I've taken a second look
I don't like what I see
then again maybe
it's just me
It's all the same on AD

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 Reviews of "Love Takes"
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on August 1, 2008
well expressed write!

Reviewed by Rosemarie Skaine
Reviewed on July 31, 2008
Perceptive write re some situations. R

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
Reviewed on July 31, 2008
I love yoru rhymes, I can see you doing open mics.

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
Reviewed on July 31, 2008
A very good poem,take care

Edwin


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