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Positively Sure
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for years i pondered these two words, "positively Sure

in thinking if my wife and i were right for each other in the marriage pure

i thought, wondered, hesitated, feared, and about every other word in these categories

then i would just throw it out of me mind and go get some mcdonald's fries

my wife would say stuff like, "you're not my husband

man was her push a strong demand

i just couldn't seem to {make up} my mind up if i wanted to be married

for we had been together many years and our love we both carried

i would make up my mind only to change it again and again

man with this type shakey back and forth thinking i knew i might not never win, grin get into the marriage bin

guess what? one day i just got tired of the back and fourth dance, prance stupid unsecure stance and decided to go on and unite our loving romance

5th of july

cry, why, defy this was it and i finally stepped up and made it legit

positively sure, who knows

there are no regrets in me now and our relationship and love still grows

a made up mind is a comfortable mind

no more axes to grind

positively true , who knows

one thing for sure this couple just goes and goes and goes

the energizer bunny, hippty hop, flippy de bop

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 Reviews of "Positively Sure"
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on March 8, 2003
Lovely write!!!

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on March 8, 2003
Congrats Grady love always grows strong when nuturted... This is excellent Peg

Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle
Reviewed on March 8, 2003
Congrats on finally making it official and I hope it lasts forever and a day. True love which lasts within our current society is a dying breed and its sad. I'm just as guilty as everyone else though.
Nice poetic take... Refreshing as always.
Jill

Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on March 8, 2003
I love the way you have expressed your relationship in this.
Chrissie


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