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I Need Advice
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(Need some help, can you help me?)
I need some good advice So be nice Asking this surely took a sacrifice You see I need the key Anyone got the key To opening an evil heart And not letting it tear you apart I got plenty of answers and philosophies But no trophies In this area of human existance Because I tend to put up resistance To the devils works Seem to always get stuck with the forks Hit me with the knowledge So I can acknowledge Your wisdom GEM

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Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on June 11, 2003

You don't want to open the devil's heart. You're too good for that. Have a great day Grady!

I probably won't be around the den for a while for personal reasons. I'm glad that everyone still has fun. Yes, very glad for everyone.

Be back when I feel better.

May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)

Reviewed on June 10, 2003

I wish anyone had the answer to that!!!! I've even tried avoidance, but evil is as evil does...hey, try another right hook....smiles
-Bear

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on June 10, 2003

loved this write, grady; well done, my friend! (((HUGS))) and love, your friend in texas, karen lynn. :)

Reviewed by nevine Al Seidi (Reader)

Reviewed on June 9, 2003

The evil heart does not have a door! This is a very valid question you asked. Evil hearts bond together , without exchaning 'love'; they share avision. If you are evil yourself, you stand a chance of 'winning' another evil heart!

I love the subject you intrduced here!

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