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If I Reach Out?
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
  
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Will your hand be there,
or will my hand continue on into the atmosphere,
still reaching for your tender touch,
still needing you so much?


When this heart finds its time in space,
will these eyes see your face,
will this skin feel your warm sweet breath,
or will you walk another path?


As this soul ponders about our love,
will your love up and move?
Was our loving connection,
one in need correction,
or can we finally bring this love affair to perfection?


Right at this moment my arms feel empty,
this heart feels pain and negativity,
this soul cries out for you,
will my reach bring about mutual affection,
or is this love headed for depletion?


G


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 Reviews of "If I Reach Out?"
Reviewed by serenety L (Reader)
Reviewed on September 29, 2003
Oh oh Grady. What is that supposed to mean? Just a poem I hope??
Love
Nico

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on September 25, 2003
Good question for the one you love Grady!!

Goodluck to you...and stay strong and "positive".....tha "Grady" advice

love Tinka

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on September 25, 2003
VEry very expressive write...enjoyed!!!!

Reviewed by Dee C.
Reviewed on September 25, 2003
A question I'm sure we've all thought of from time to time...yearning for conformation and reassurance that our feelings for another are returned.
You've done a wonderful job with this piece!!

Reviewed by L M (Reader)
Reviewed on September 24, 2003
Very well expressed.

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on September 24, 2003
When You Reach Out You Always Get What You Don't (like) Want N Then Some,i.e. Think About It_

Those You Love Most Hurt You The Most,i.e. Depletion, Deception!! If You Measure Love With Ruler Inch By Inch You Never Get Hurt
Only Depleted In Advance!!

TRASK

Reviewed by Regina Pounds
Reviewed on September 24, 2003
Being in love can be a roller coaster ride...you express all the doubts so well!

Gina

Reviewed by Tyler Wiseman
Reviewed on September 24, 2003
Some sentiment here, your convictions seem true. I also like the first stanza.

I'm thinking you used "love" too much, however.

Reviewed on September 24, 2003
I feel this one, G! And I really like the first verse.... stay strong, friend...
In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by Jimmy Mills (Reader)
Reviewed on September 24, 2003
Good question for the one you love. Well expressed my friend. Jim


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