Oooh! You used my favourite type of form for poetry! The use was great, Erica!
I love that end (though it wasn't part of the poem), "May you stop being afraid..." with the three dots to make you really think. Love that.
The poem itself was exquisite. One of your finest works that speaks to the reader with a soul behind it. I feel as if your soul, your real soul, is talking to me when I read it. I can really feel the emotion and the expression. Great work!
A book-length psychodynamic study of pathological narcissism, relationships
with abusive narcissists, and the Narcissistic Personality Disorder, using a new vocabulary.
i've been there
makes for good poetry
not much else
certainly a good poem
john +
Bill Murray
I love that end (though it wasn't part of the poem), "May you stop being afraid..." with the three dots to make you really think. Love that.
The poem itself was exquisite. One of your finest works that speaks to the reader with a soul behind it. I feel as if your soul, your real soul, is talking to me when I read it. I can really feel the emotion and the expression. Great work!
Warm Love,
*-Brittany-*