How quickly angry words crush the spirit of a love
That seemed destined for forever
Their weight turning friendship to enmity
Leaving us in a breathless freefall
Accelerating from one accusation to another like a bullet
Whose trajectory aims
Straight for the soul
Floor by floor, year by year
Until we hit bottom
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Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on July 27, 2003
Wow, this is a keeper and so excellant!
BRAVO
~Nikki~
How quickly angry words crush the spirit of a love
That seemed destined for forever
Their weight turning friendship to enmity
Leaving us in a breathless freefall
Accelerating from one accusation to another like a bullet
Whose trajectory aims
Straight for the soul
Floor by floor, year by year
Until we hit bottom
Heartbreaking write.. When love dies .. nothing is sadder
When I wrote ths book in 2000, I was concerned about children having access to the Internet and to chat rooms where "you can be anyone you want." Here we are many years later and the situation with children talking freely to stangers on the Internet
I have taken pride in writing this novel as so many people have the wrong impression on bikers because they dress in leather clothing which is to protect themselves in case of an accident. The majority of bikers are known Policemen, Firemen, Doctors,
BRAVO
~Nikki~
That seemed destined for forever
Their weight turning friendship to enmity
Leaving us in a breathless freefall
Accelerating from one accusation to another like a bullet
Whose trajectory aims
Straight for the soul
Floor by floor, year by year
Until we hit bottom
Heartbreaking write.. When love dies .. nothing is sadder