One from long ago, my first Hard Copy Publication. Previously published in the Santa Cruz "Essay"
Such sufficing grace
as to precede creative desire
The essence of beauty
held within my sight
How can I be brave
when my only fear is losing this moment
.
Love Falls upon me like summer rain
as so many colors resound within
this heart, made fragile by caution
like a crystalline tuner
her voice reminds me of a lily lined flute
the soft willow warble,
sweet melodic reverberation,
the soft full sound
What sweeter words I know not
than I love you
(On music, Waltz Schmaltz, it's all sublime to my ear)
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Reviews of "Jewel I"
Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on July 7, 2003
Ah Tyler, you have been blessed my a Twin Flame Connection..ride the cosmos with your Jewel.....for now you CAN!!!..
This is awesome! Your flow of words amazes me so deeply. I can almost hear the sweet words spoken.
Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)
Reviewed by Andre Emmanuel Bnedavi ben-YEHU
Reviewed on June 29, 2003
It is as soft as profoudly touching, inspiring, and scented with aroma of grace... "Jewel I" bears the sounds of love from a heart that pumps dews of sublimity.
Andre Emmanuel bendavi ben-YEHU
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This was no mere illusion. Colin Chase Rand, pulled through a magical portal, landed in 1935 where the dust bowl and the Great Depression was destroying lives, and a serial killer was in their midst
Vesna
than I love you" great ending, she must have really had your heart, this is beautiful!
This is awesome! Your flow of words amazes me so deeply. I can almost hear the sweet words spoken.
Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)
Andre Emmanuel bendavi ben-YEHU
>>>>>>>>>Sorry for pressing the key by mistake on prior window. < < < < < < < < <