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In Somalia a girl must be circumcised
before the age of puberty to comply with the long-standing culture and tradition.

Rite of Passage


Birth of a baby must be a blessing event
But mine was just like a curse
Daddy’s face didn’t shine. Drums didn’t make noise
In my culture, gender counts most
A girl is not as welcome as a baby boy
No shots are fired in the air
No ritual ceremony is held

Raising camel in the desert
Is family’s highest priority
They believe a girl has no hands for that
Harsh combat against enemies
Is family’s highest priority
They believe a girl has no heart for that

At five I had to face the worst
A knife cut across my genitals
A midwife circumcised me
Stitched me, infibulated me
Where I should have had a clit
I have a black scar now.
They call it a "Rite of Passage"
But I see it as "The Acme of Injustice"

In the name of culture
unnecessary pain is inflicted upon me
Would this evil act ever be eradicated?
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Reviewed by Rosemarie Skaine
Reviewed on November 2, 2005
Excellent poem reflecting the pain and suffering women-girl-children face not only with the physical, but also their societal role. Bless, for writing about FGM. R

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on January 4, 2004
{{{{Abdi}}}}
Ohhhhhhhhh my goodness I do agree this is a cruel injustice to female children and their futures that NEEDS TO BE CEASED AT ONCE!!!!
This is a truly powerful POWERFUL MOVING WRITE!!!! WAKE UP WOMEN ALL OVER THE WORLD AND LET'S TOGETHER STOP THE CRUELTIES BEING DONE TO OUR SISTERS!!!!
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~

Reviewed on January 4, 2004
This is a practice that NEEDS to be stopped! Too many young girls and women are maimed or even damaged by this horrible practice! What a barbaric practice; oh, the humanity of it all! Thanks for shedding light on FGM; this is an issue that needs to be addressed and eradicated! BRAVA, Abdi-Noor, for your courage in writing this poem!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :( >tears <

Reviewed on January 4, 2004
(((abdinoor)))

a haunting, devastating write--this practice of FGM must be eradicated. *tears*

you've read my poem on this subject ("FGM"--for Maria), you know how much i abhor this.

i pray for you and for the little girls that must suffer REAL pain.

((((HUGS)))) and love,

karla. :(

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on January 4, 2004
Abdinoor, I'm so touched by this write. I know how much it hurt you to write it...I pray it will be resolved one day soon, but it seems our worldly culture cares more about advancing in technology than in how to behave as human beings...Bless you Abdi You and your country are in my prayers.(see my "Dying Planet" the pic is from Somalia, I had what you told me in mind, when I wrote it...

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on January 4, 2004
This breaks my heart.....It is sad that there are some places where a woman has no value....we, both men and women are equal...My God .....sometimes we get it all so wrong...

I will fight anyone that tries to tell me.... myself or my Daughter are not as worthwhile as a man.

A very moving write...thank you for sharing this with us. You have my respect and admiration.

Dani

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on January 4, 2004
I agree with Rage's comments. And thank you for enlightening many of us on yet another example of mankind's inhumanity. Similar examples exist in many cultures and countries. Mankind truly does have a long long way to go.

Reviewed by Larry Rochelle
Reviewed on January 4, 2004
It takes years for enlightenment. In America, women still cannot get equal rights. In fact, conservative women don't want equal rights, so they hinder their own progress and that of others. Thanks, Abdi-Noor


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