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what, if not life, is poetry?

you try so hard to be just right
to fit between the sorrows
and insanity
to stave off
that bitter taste
of disappointment soup

and to think
at the very start she cried
“I won’t measure up”
while measuring him up
and knowing full well
she would die
to take him on
...at least for size

and he’ll scribe
into her mind
it is a spiritual thing
merely needing
the right environment
upon which to set
itself free

and so they’ll embark
on a very short journey
set between the shadows
of each others distant lives
where in the middle
of the beginning
of the end
he’ll say
thanks for the effort
ha ha
good-bye
sweet disappointment

and she’ll be reminded
in a bed of her own problem
upon which he liked for her
to be fed
she wasn’t f***ing right


© 2006 sara coslett

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 Reviews of "expletive included"
Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on June 18, 2006
'where in the middle
of the beginning
of the end' -- great line.

Left me with a conundrum. Cute. Verb, adjective, or noun?

Ron

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on June 17, 2006
very effective, Sara ...

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on June 16, 2006
Needs a decent bloke. Life is so much more than shagging....

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on June 16, 2006
Most powerful offering Sara!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed on June 16, 2006
Perfection in hard hitting, poignant poetry (including the expletive). It's real, honest...well done, Sara!

(((HUGS))) and love, karla.

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
Reviewed on June 16, 2006
Powerful, indeed! Clever and. . .p e r f e c t o !!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on June 16, 2006
what, if not life, is poetry?..

And what a powerful poem this is.

Reviewed by F William Broome
Reviewed on June 16, 2006
Great poetry, Sara! Your writing is graphic and specail, so, I hardly notice the strong and fitting word. A side comment might be, "Men are so godamned greedy and hormonal, I often wonder how women continue to take it. Surely, there are signs that one of these "Smoothies" isn't going to be there for breakfast!"
Keep on telling it like it ain't gonna' change! - Bill

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on June 16, 2006
Yes this is an interesting one and I think you have nailed it quite well.

Felix

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on June 15, 2006
I don't blame you for the expletive,the topic required it! powerful poem,and great line that Chanti quoted!

etw

Reviewed by Chanti Niven
Reviewed on June 15, 2006
I especially love the line 'what, if not life, is poetry' Your poem demonstrates this in great form.
Chanti


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