I don’t need a special day
to say ~ I love you.
Nor, do I even need to say it
... hardly at all.
I live it everyday
in the things I show;
the words I speak;
the thoughts I share
with you and everyone.
I do it because
you are my twin star.
Ever constant;
always spinning;
pulling and pushing
with the right pressure.
Moving in harmony
along my plane,
but never nearing
my corona.
So before I forget
let me reaffirm what you and I know
~ I love you!
I enjoy the video and the poem.Your poem is full of honest expressions and feelings.The first verse grab my attention as it was my favorite.People should love each other everyday and not take each for granted.Plus it shouldn't take one day out of the year for people to express their love for each other.take care
Receiving words like this would make any lover... even more so.
Your offering is minimal and states it as it should be.
Enormacly vivid and convincing!
Beautiful Sara. Ed suggested I read this because these are his sentiments exactly. I agree that holidays such as Valentine's day are overly commercialized but since we all need affirmation for me it's a good excuse to show love in a tangible way. Ed pampered me to death yesterday and I have to say that I loved every minute of it. I don't need chocolates and flowers but words (for me at any rate) mean so much. The one you wrote this for will no doubt be deeply touched. Just perfect!
love Chanti
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I like the sentiment expressed in the second stanza...your words glitter with truth!
Cryssa
fee
Edwin
Both warm and strong, a true voice here...speaking wonderfully.
John
is wonderfully written. What I'm trying to say is, You're
wonderful. -gene.
Receiving words like this would make any lover... even more so.
Your offering is minimal and states it as it should be.
Enormacly vivid and convincing!
Doug
love Chanti
PS: Loved the video!!!
This is beautifully imaged in verse and in video. Well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.